StoneHeart

Hey thar! Black here for a real nice and quick Review! First off! Impressive piece here! I love your originality, your comparisons, your style, your plot, your everything - Hence ...

Hey Elinor, Black here for a quick review. First off: Impressive work here. Your detail is very nice, and your wording in showing the emotions is exquisite! Readers always love ...

Hey Gabrielle! Again, welcome to YWS! Here I am for a quick review (I gotta get back to school soon here, so . . . :D) Okay, so first off, ...

Hiya thar! Black here for a review. First off, impressive piece you have here. Well written, emotional, interesting, with a good, good, good theme! You have a great style (A ...

Okay, Black here for a quick Review (Not much more I can do). Oookay! This looks interesting, incomplete, but interesting! You seem on your way to a good story, a ...

Okay, so Black here for a real quick review! Okay, so this was interesting, it was kinda slowly written, but interesting still. Attention catching. And very, very odd. First off: ...

er . . . Okay, so I'm not exactly getting why this is here. :D I advise you to write something . . . anything works! Really though, ANYTHING! Edit ...

Hey thar! Black here for a Review! Aplause, aplause! Impressive piece of work you have written here, some odd grammar, odd style, but good plot, good theme, and good pacing! ...

Ah, okay, so I'll just drop in for a real, real quick review. Problem with this: It's not at all like how a personal letter is written. Sit down and ...

Okay, hey! Black here for a review! First off: Really nice work here, I am seriously impressed by your inventiveness and skill! Originality means a lot in fantasy, and an ...

Okay, Black here for a review! Okay, I'll admit that I am seriously impressed with the emotions and theme of this piece. Seriously impressed! I rarely run into work with ...

Okay, Black here for a Review! All right! First off I want to announce to the world what an amazing piece of writing you have here! It is AMAZING! I ...

Okay, Black here for requested review! Your overall problems are pretty simple really: Pace. Your poem is jerky! Try to read through it . . . do you feel the ...

Ah, okay, Black here for a review! I do believe that I've reviewed a chapter of this story before! So that gives me a start - though I'm thinking that ...

Okay, Black here for a Review! Now this was good, it had the original potential for becoming something great, it had the skill needed to get it finished, and it ...