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Re: Pickles
HAHA! this was the shiznit! I love pickles! It pushed out its arms And shoved out its legs It split near the top A mouth filled with teeth It ran ...
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Re: Insecurity
Son of a biscuit eating bulldog!! this was my cat's meow (dont have a cat but if I did this would be his meow!) This was short but damn did ...
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Re: Simple Beauty
Lifting herself up, she begins to cheerfully walk home. The world seems to go silent as she walks, people's voices are nothing but whispers car horn's are nothing but mice. ...
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Re: My Perfect Girl
This was so sweet !I can't even express my emotions right now or how much I liked it! That to this everlasting relationship You will bring Your love and devotion ...
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Re: Last Tear
Aw this was so depressing! Poor guy! I’m so tired of waiting I’m so tired of trying I’m so tired of pretending this will someday work out I don’t want ...
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Re: The Forest
Animals tremble in horror Shedding tears For a home That was humbly theirs. Now I stand Drenched in sweat A place of beauty Now a land of barrenness. I loved ...
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Re: The Truth
What the H-E Double Hockey Sticks! This was wicked! The ending just a mind blow! 'Just the voice in your head' I'm all mother of pearl! This was great! I ...
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Re: The Lion
Outrageous so contagious! I really liked this I like the old school medieval feel, like Shakespeare. Claws that grip around my throat, that lay me in my final rest. Pause ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: sorry I am leaving the site due to study issues ( aka no tim
Oh snap! I'm totally intrigued! although I think that in chapter 1 it kind of drags on like detail is great and all some people have a gift for it ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Opening the door
Today I'm finally going to do it. I'm going to open the door, Show them the real me. This is something many people fear, you don't know how people are ...
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Re: Crying in the rain
I’ve got it all, don’t want anything more, Don’t want anything else because I’m hard core. This was just awesome. I loved this part, I read it and I'm like ...
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Re: Scars
Aw snap! I freaking loved this! It was so awesome I would definitely bump this while cruising. They say bones are broken by sticks and stones, but what about hearts, ...
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Re: Uncertainty
just like standing at the very frame Of a newly frozen lake Pondering upon the fence If a step would cause a crack, A beak, a split and a fall; ...
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Re: A Parents Love
I stomp my feet, I throw a tantrum I scream and yell I threaten to move out I did that once, never again everyone threatened to knock my teeth out ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Apocalpse:What now? Prologue
Oh my damn! This is wicked!Reminds me of a "The Fifth Element' sort of feel, nonetheless I love it already! It's already captivating and even if it's been done before, ...
Sep 13, 2011
