SteppeVesteffi

Hello, So this was cute. First, I'll start with the positives. I thought you did a pretty good job at setting the scene and describing the surroundings. You were succinct, ...

Hello, This is an extremely difficult story to review, but I'm going to try—out of foolishness or cockiness or a need to never back down from a challenge, I'm not ...

Hello, So I was definitely not expecting something quite this heavy. (Not that that's a bad thing.) It's very good. I liked the way you wrote it: Stylistic choices can ...

Hello, So what we have here is a deeply flawed piece of writing with good bones. First, let me tell you what I liked. The ending was quite surprising—I didn't ...

Hello, So this piece was... something. I'm honestly not 100% sure what it was. First, character wakes up in the sewer (??), then gets the hell out of there (cuz ...

Hello, This is a cute story! I really liked how you wrote it—that almost childlike, earnest, sweetly sincere way... it really felt like it was written with David's age and ...

Hello, This story... well, I've got lots to say about this one. First, I'll start with some positives. I really like how you described the action sequences. Those can be ...

Hello, This was a fun read! I'm really intrigued by the world you have here. It makes me want to read the story these characters are from. Like pkidchick said, ...

Hello, This is a sweet, sad little piece you've got here. So you said in your note that you wanted to push yourself by writing about something that you don't ...

Hello, Wow. This was something else. Your writing, first of all, is beautiful. You've managed to wring stunning sentences from a story that is, at its core, dark and woeful ...

Hello, Oh wow, this is fantastic. I love, love, love your writing style; the way this story is written is just perfect. It feels very realistic—from the text conversation to ...

Hello, FangirlDivided! (Have I told you yet that I love your username? Cuz I do.) This is quite a delightful chapter! One thing that stood out to me while reading ...

Hello, So this was an interesting piece. I liked the concept and I liked how you kept it brief, broken up into three neat paragraphs—just enough to show a snippet ...

Hello there, This is amazing! Not even being hyperbolic—it's glorious. I think I know why no one has reviewed it yet: it's honestly too good. So much of a review ...

Hello! Boy, this story's a weird one. I don't mean that in the pejorative sense either, but in the wow-what-did-I-just-read, head-trippy, cool sense. Because I really enjoyed it. One thing ...