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Hello Pomp! Been a while since I reviewed this LMS eh? I had some time to spare, so I thought why not. Now, twenty-nine, Evian was still—still—a whirlwind, and it ...

Hey Aux. So yea, it's nice to see that Linna is more aware of her surroundings and is trying to be more prudent. This section isn't bad overall, but at ...

Hey Pomp, it's time for round 3! I think I should start off by saying that I actually quite like your imagery in this chapter. You did a really good ...

OK Pomp, round 2. So I found this chapter to actually be less intriguing than the first. I wouldn't say that it's boring, it just felt lackluster in a few ...

Hey there Pomp. So overall, this was a pretty decent read for me. I don't really have much to say about it, but there are a few things that prevented ...

Hey Aux. So I'm going to review what you currently have of this novel all in one go here. So right off the bat, I'm going to tell you that ...

Hello! How does it feel to get my 666th review? Miles stirred beside and I watched him as his eyes opened, surprise registering for a second before contentment replaced it. ...

Let's get it on. I stood there, mouth agape staring at the back of my resurrected childhood friend as she turned around and focused a familiar pair of limpid green ...

First review of the new year. I realize that something wasn’t right with his expression, his face that was seldom lacked a smile was masked in austerity. Nix the first ...

Hey there. So I quite liked your start. I liked how secretive Kizzy was being in the catacombs and how she blended in with the crowd. It gave me some ...

When was the first time you fell in love?" He asked suddenly, swirling the straw against the hapless ice melting at the bottom of his drink. "First time, in love?" ...

Let's begin. Stems of white orchids hung from the ceiling in test tubes filled with clear water. The way this is worded is weird. It's implying to me that the ...

By my count, it was your seventh summer that year. And the ninth for me. Really confused by this sentence. Seems to suggest the boy's seven years of age, the ...

Hey. "I'm tired of waiting and being under subordination in hell to Lucifer, it's time I come out of my shell and take over what's rightfully ours, this world." OK ...

Hey there Nafa, and welcome to YWS. Soft, white flakes fell to from a grey sky, coating the landscape in a milky blanket. The snow cover remained unperturbed save for ...