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Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter Two [Revised]
Hello, Zont. Wolf here for a review. You're really trying to make this hard on me, aren't you? This is so good, I can't even believe it. Your descriptions are ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 20 Part 2
Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. Wow. Usually I'd be wondering why this is still in the Green Room, but it's seriously gold. Nonetheless, I will find ways to ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Misery or Humanity, chapters 6,7,8
Hello, rocketdog. Wolf here for a review. Alright, so I'm kind of against placing more than one chapter into one work, mostly because, if you can do that and have ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 18: The festival
Hello, Artemis. Wolf here for a review. Sorry it took me so long to get to this part, but I'm here now! Ah, the festival. Yes, I get there's a ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: A curious case of a follower/stalker.
Hello Laughmaster. Wolf here for a review. Alright, so I'm not really sure what to make of this. In a way, I can still consider this as a short story, ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 20 Part 1
Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. How is this still in the Green Room? So sad. (I will not proceed to loosely relate this to the review xD) Speaking ...
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: Typo Alley~D Part One
Hello, R4. Wolf here for a review. So, I'm not sure how I feel about the beginning. It seems kind of abrupt to me, since in the last part of ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Ill Fated Love- Chapter 5
Hello again, Blocked. Wolf here for a review. So I understand that this is supposed to be a romance novel, but I really feel like things are moving too fast ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Ill Fated Love Chapter 4
Hello, Blocked. Wolf here for a review. So I notice that the first line of this chapter is the exact same line as the very last one of the previous ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 21.
Hello, Raven. Wolf here for a review. A name change. Very interesting. I agree with it, since having three characters with names so similar could get confusing, but I bet ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Redwing - Chapter 6
Hello, Utopia. Wolf here for a review, as promised. I'll go straight into the critiquing, just so I don't lose my train of thought. Though, I'll say right now I ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 19
Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. Okay, so this was a quite interesting chapter, in a both good and bad way. So we get to meet this Phillip, who ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 2
Oh goodness no! No, no, no, no, no! You can't do this to me Noelle, you can't. Oh gosh, my heart man, it's just been ripped out and shattered... Again! ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 18 Part 1
Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. I see what you meant by the abrupt ending. It's hard to split chapters up sometimes, I get that, but I kind of ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter One [Revised]
Whoa, whoa, whoa. Hold up. What happened to all your other parts, huh? Didn't we have this talk about not starting the draft over until you can't get anything else ...
Aug 13, 2014