SpiritedWolfe

Hello, Artemis! Wolf here for a review! Right off the bat, I feel like you could expand the beginning into something more. Really pull us in and get into the ...

Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Woah, woah, woah. Where's the pick up? You suddenly drop off the last chapter and don't pick us up? How rude That's not ...

Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for another review. Alright, so smack dab in the middle of this, I see this giant paragraph of dialogue. Like, woah. So, dialogue works just like ...

Hey, Artemis! Wolf here for a review. Alright, this chapter seemed to jump around a little bit. First it started with Billie having to pass her finals, then there's the ...

Hey, Artemis! Wolf here finally for a review. I'm going to tell you right now that, since this is review day, my reviews are going to be very scattered and ...

Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. Yay! Some Zalyn action going in huh? Very exciting :3 So, I'll go straight into the critique. It is a good chapter, much ...

Hello, ellact. Wolf here for a review. This was so short and sweet, which really added to the ending. The ending was very adorable, and I have to admit I ...

Hello, Raven. Wolf here for a review. I've finally caught back up, yes! Alright, so the beginning sort of doesn't make much sense, not does it seem very chronological. Okay, ...

Hello again, Raven. Wolf here for another review. Thankfully, I can tell you that this one is filled with a lot less critique and more praise. This time I'm not ...

Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. I'm speechless. This has to be, by far, your best chapter. It was fantastic through and through. Everything flowed well, I was very ...

Hello, Absoluetly. Wolf here for a review. Interesting little part you have here. As mentioned before by Sillia, you don't really have enough descriptions for just the first chapter, and ...

Hello, Raven. Wolf here for a review. Man, how did I get so behind? I remember clearly reading this and thinking about reviewing it, but I never actually got around ...

Hello, Kataya. Wolf here for a review. Wow. Just, wow. Now I'm not being sarcastic here xD I'm not saying "Wow, dis is so pathetic, y u be so needy." ...

Hello, Noelle. Wolf here for a review. Gah, this one too! >.< You have to go and make everything difficult, don't you. Not going to be much critique in this, ...

Hello, Artemis. Wolf here for a review. The last part of the prophecy is true? I wonder which part is considered 'the last'. Is it cut straight in half, or ...