Soulkana

Hey Amelia I'm here as promised!!! This was amazing. The first line caught my eyes and I couldn't resist reading the rest. ^^ I honestly don't have any complaints...not much ...

Hi Amelia, You asked and I'm here so. I must stay this was beautifully well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the emotions and the poetry. My only suggestion is to split ...

I loved this...a little bit depressing but that's all good ^^. I liked how you describe each line and how it flows rather nicely together. I can't find anything grammar ...

Mwahaha genius!! I bet this will be my dad's reaction whenever I start driving XD. I like how some parts are long and some lines only have one word...adds to ...

Hey there, Sorry this is a very short is wayyyyyyyy past my bedtime and I need rest. I'll add to reading list and most definitely look and give a much ...

Hey there!! I only have a few things to critique before I go on. Feel fresh cut grass tickle your toes Fallow the savor of roses Wind waltzing among emerald ...

Hey there Miss!! Looks like I'm reviewing for you today...must say nice job. I'm not all that into religion but that will not sway my judgment nor does that hold ...

Hey Amelia!!! I'm here as promised!! Must say this honestly blew my mind XD. You are very talented. The going between two points of view were very nicely done. It ...

Hi there looks like I'm reviewing today!!** Well first of all nicely well done ^^. Can't really pinpoint anything other than add some commas and periods or something....maybe that is ...

Hey looks like I'm reviewing.... YAY!!!! Ok shoving that enthusiasm aside i must say, marvelously well done with this. It dragged me in and I didn't want to stop reading ...

Wow I really liked this. Loved all of it. Honestly I don't have anything to critique.. Am not good with grammar so I can't fix that much so I say ...

Hey horses!!! Looks like I'm reviewing for ya today XD. Ok first of all absolutely LOVED this greatly. I loved this I just say it might be longer...add more details ...

I hide behind a fake smile , dying inside . H oping you'll see and finally come save me , but still I'm alone waiting for the shadows to consume ...

Hey Solv!!! Want to say I truly enjoyed this entire story so yay...however I had trouble understanding some parts about the phone conversation but I think it was just me ...

Very well done I truly enjoyed this. I hope to read more of your work soon. I could not find anything wrong with this by grammar or spelling means so ...