Soulkana

Awesome job haha. Oh I believe everyone hasn't done their homework due to this awesome site at one point or another!!! Like me XD I'm suppose to looking up stuff ...

I really loved this ^^ amazing details it paints a very vivid picture in my head. Good luck and I hope you get many helpful reviews. I cannot find any ...

Ok I say this is really good as it is now. I just have one thing to say: longer. Add more description there's a lot more to add to this ...

This was beautifully well done. ^^ The descriptions are really good and the idea is most definitely interesting. The fact the sun has burned out in this story makes it ...

You should separate the dialogues so its not confusing. it also helps so we know who is talking at the time. Other than that I cannot find anything wrong with ...

This is good!!! I really loved it...you and your descriptions XD. Either way I see, now, why you find them so important haha. Good luck and I hope you get ...

OK you said not to be afraid to be mean so here it goes XD: I think you need to work on the repetition; stead of using The way at ...

This makes me sad. There must be a story behind this as is with many poems. The details are very well done and creates a very good picture. The emotion ...

This is very good. The descriptions are very good and the emotion is very vivid. This paints a deep picture in my head. I hope to read more of your ...

This is good. Nice descriptions, although it seems to repeat some places. Other than that it is marvelous. I can't wait for more keep up the good work and I ...

This is really good. All I say is add some more detail. What do they do when they're excited...how do they react during the wait. Other than that this is ...

Tylyn this is good. I really liked this. From your explanations it was hard to read but it still worked out rather well lols. Keep up the good work and ...

This is very beautiful I want to say! ^^ Good job. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or spelling errors in this at all. The emotion in this sets a ...

Dreamwalker I read this quickly since I'm trying to write something and I want to say good job. I really loved this and the detail is amazing!! Keep up the ...

I honestly didn't see anything wrong with this poem whatsoever so good job!!! Keep up the good work I could feel the emotion in this which makes it easy to ...