Soulkana

Hi dbrick! Kana here for your poem on this lovely Review Day! To start off, I like your poem and the concept behind it. I can make sense of the ...

Hi Kelpies! Okay so I wanted to start of saying that this is a very good plot to me. Anyways. You should set the scene a bit more in the ...

Hi Anon! I really enjoyed this work! The metaphor of a needle in a haystack really fits in well with people's attempt to find the person who they love and ...

Hi Soulful! I must say I find this chapter very interesting! I loved the concept though there are a few things I wanted to point out. If there's a dream, ...

Hi Sunshine! Well to start off, I enjoyed this poem. It brought back lots of memories for me since I can definitely understand with the narration quite a bit. I ...

Hi Shay, It's me again! Anyways, this piece is beautifully done. You really gave a pretty good insight into this emotional turmoil. Having suffered depression before, I can truly empathize ...

Hi Dysalt! I found this an interesting piece. I can agree with many of the lines here and some of the others are bit confusing to me. I find this ...

Hi Pomp! Well first off, you definitely need to look into capping your I's. I did like this poem because it is very spot on in ways. My favorite part ...

Hi Yubbies! First off, this song was very well written. I can definitely say your imagery with this work was very spot on. I do find the dark emotions a ...

Hey Shay! You have a very interesting story going on here and I really can't wait to read more about this. It is very well written although you have a ...

Hi Jazzy! Well I can say I've never read of poem by Elliot so I don't have much a reference for this but I can say I truly enjoyed reading ...

Hi Sun! I'm Soulkana and I'll be reviewing your poem! To start off I really like the theme behind this poem but I think you could add more into this. ...

Hi Magpie! Well I'm here to review this lovely poem. The title spiked my interest because here where I live summer is approaching and we had our first taste of ...

Well, Persy! I'm here to review for you today. I'll start off saying I really liked this poem and it was very descriptive. However, I felt like the first line ...

Hello Panda!!! Soul here to review for you! Must state that reviewing poetry to me is always a challenge. Still, I do like this poem. The imagery is great. But ...