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A bit short but very nice. You could add a few extra lines you know, so that it makes a better picture of what you really want to say.

Really corny. I like the last one though

This is really good. I love it. You should leave it just as it is. Good work.

This was really good. I really enjoyed this, something different and I like different.

Okay... I didn't really like this. Don't show this to your band or else they'll rip you apart

Ha ha. Very funny Mr. president. I am not the real person when it comes to history but I think it needs a bit of work.

I really liked this. It was very funny and it tells you the truth in a weird way. :lol:

I read it and I think it is really good. The did not really flow. But anyway, it was really nice!

It could use a little more work. It is a nice idea an is is nice to explore new ways of typing, but there is something missin in this that ...

Ha ha. very funny. Really liked this.

It was okay. I won't say it was the best. There wasn't any flow in this poem. Sorry,but you should listen to fand. He be very wise and is very ...

Very nice. Can't find anything wrong

It was too short. I think you could've told more. You didn't give enough detail. You should prenounce all of your words in full words. If you know what I ...

Okay thanxs for comments.

Dude. Make paragraphs. Makes it much easier to read. I think the story line is okay. The only problem is you're rushing in your story. Tell more about one specific ...