Published October 14, 2007
It's been
5 days
6hours
31 minutes
why can't i hear myself
you're gone
and i'm here all alone
no one to see
ME CRYYYYYYY
ME CRYYYYY
for you have left
a tear drop
a puddle
a RAIN STORM
sliding my cheek
Dont give me that innocent look again
dont pretend that you did nothin
I thought it was you but i guess i was wrong
There goes another one
out the door and running to the car again
How could I blow this one so deep
Here i go again
blabbering blabbering how many of them ran
AWAY FROM ME
Can't you see?
I' m here alone again
studdering
crying
hoping no more will hurt
me again
happiness
is not in this catogory
hope is to strong
love is to painful
hurt is the path i chose
Cause its been
12 years
9 hours
22 minutes
since i've loved
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Oh. My. God.
Sheer genius!
i could hear this song in my head. cool.
but check your spelling and punctuation, k?
First of all I would like some punctuations in this poem.Don'rt forget to punctuate them.
Frankly saying the starting was a bit abstract for me.
I would say the poem was just ok.
Okay...
I didn't really like this.
Don't show this to your band or else they'll rip you apart