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Re: The sun is black on my tongue-
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! Wow, you did a great job on this. I really enjoyed the different imagery and symbolism you used. Right off the bat, the ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: Don't Frame Love
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! I really enjoyed this one. The rhythm flowed very nicely, as did the rhyme scheme making the poem sound almost like song lyrics. ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: Who am I?
Hey there! Sofie here with a review - I really enjoyed this one. It's a very simple poem, yet the emotion definitely comes through. I think it's so interesting and ...
Apr 15, 2024 -
Re: all the things I can't achieve
Hey there, Sofie here with a short review - I gotta say, the title really drew me in. I was pleasantly surprised by the many emotions you managed to capture ...
Feb 28, 2024 -
Re: heartburn (heart burns)
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! Such a beautiful poem! Very melancholic, I could really feel every word. This right here is my favorite verse; "don’t eulogize your home ...
Feb 21, 2024 -
Re: the facts of orbiting
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! Wow. In just a few short lines you managed to say so much! So much about how love can feel almost inevitable at ...
Feb 21, 2024 -
Re: i love you so much you don't even know
Hey there, Sofie here with a review - I really love how simple this poem is. The animation as well, adds so much to it. On the following lines; "Perhaps ...
Feb 21, 2024 -
Re: in a box under my bed
Hey there! Sofie here with a review! Man, I love how short and sweet this one is. I think my favorite part is the Hamlet reference; "to be or not ...
Mar 15, 2023 -
Re: 108.
Hey there, Sofia here with a review! Wow, I really really liked this one! I like how simple and ambiguous the title is. I also think you really ended it ...
Mar 15, 2023 -
Re: Of broken bottles
Hey there! Sofie here with a review :) First off, I think you did a great job on this. The poem flows very well and is very lyrical, almost transfixing. ...
Mar 15, 2023 -
Re: I remember you
Hey there, Sofie here with a review :) Wow, I really like this one. You know, everybody talks about grief after someone dies, but grieving someone who's still alive and ...
Mar 12, 2023 -
Re: when the chat room's empty
Hey there, Sofie here with a review! Okay, I love this for several reasons lol first, it's extremely relatable. I think all of us who grew up here on the ...
Mar 12, 2023 -
Re: The Search
Hey there! Sofie here with a review :) great job on this one. You set the scene so well, and really put the reader there in the storm you were ...
Mar 12, 2023 -
Re: hell is found in the children's section of the library
Hey there! It's Sofie here with a review:) LOL this someone who has worked around school kids I felt this DEEPLY lol. And I've spent a lot of time at ...
Mar 23, 2022 -
Re: Scream At Midday
Hey there! Sofie here with a review :) First off, I think you did a really great job on this! You've got a real knack for imagery. You really paint ...
Mar 23, 2022
