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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: When Two Worlds Collide - Chapter One

    Hey, Lau here for a review! I really enjoyed this and I definitely like the main character. I like where this is heading also and I was entertained threw the ...

    Nov 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Princess of Hades- chapter one

    Did you just the kill the main character in chapter one? Impressive. Welcome to YWS!!! *bursts out balloons* I'm sorry I can't review...currently on my phone. You should be glad...I'm ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: to be a boy, raised as a girl

    This was really beautiful.well done. I have already hit the like button.

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Guardians- Chapter 2.1

    Great, dessert is what I meant! duh! Have you never seen an empty dessert?

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Guardians- Chapter 2.1

    Only thing I will reveal is that Robin is no one. Sorry.

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 5/5

    Fine, you don't have to be banished... *Unbanishes*

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dream Sequence 5/5

    Fine, you don't have to be banished... *Unbanishes*

    Sep 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.2

    Yep, she had two dads. Paps and Daddy Joe. I will work on the spelling mistakes. I'm not english, so its a little harder for me. Thanks for the advice, ...

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.3

    I have never liked anyone's review more than yours. Should I tag you when I post another chapter?

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.2

    Thank you! I will defenitely follow that advice!

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.1

    I love your idea that Lu speaks to her about the fire and that will defenitely go in. Thanks for the review!

    Sep 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Tryal's Curse 3.1

    It was "an" exceptionally rude someone That's all I got...gosh, I do not want to know what your stories are like when you do like them, because this would be ...

    Aug 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Humor Re: Dating The Grammar Police

    So many grammar mistakes, I can't even.....

    Aug 25, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: 30 Day Writing Challange.

    Thank you.

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: true love

    I like this a lot. Well done!

    Jul 18, 2015


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