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Lau here for a review! I really liked it and most parts were extremely funny, but I also wanted to read more. Couple of things: "without waiting for a reply ...

Hey, Lau here for a review. "Iris looked down at the ground. "Uh...I think so?" Avalon raised one eyebrow. "You think so." "I didn't mean to! Honestly I didnt! I ...

This is Mean. You make ALLL of us super excited about this dystopian world, where we have a saucepan, and baby Turnips, and Kastyn...And, then woosh, the end?! No! I ...

Hello! Ohhh, this was fun. I liked the bad guy, and its hard to make someone liked and hated at the same time. I have a question: How come no ...

Hey Tiger! Well, I kind of love this. I love the fact of how angry he was. We don't get enough characters who want to kill. Suggestion: -He could think ...

Hey, Lau here for a review! I really liked the fact that the girls were complete oposites. I liked the writing style, but I want to tell you about something ...

Here I go! Don't hate me if I fail at this review, okay? "One of the car doors was already open, a pile of clothes on the pavement. So someone, ...

Heya! Gosh...If this isn't one of your best works...what is? I was very..let's say fragile when I read this. I also have a sister. And I couldn't imagine a world ...

Heya ThePheonix! If you want some name suggestions, go to baby name sites. Some sugestions for right now are, Owen, Aaron, Peter, Oscar, Bennett, Anthony, Rafael, Alex, there are a ...

Hello Halfbloodcheetah! I just realized you and Jackson are both half human half cheetahs-Did Manser transform you too? Okay, first of all. This was awesome! I like the plot. Love ...

Hey, Chapter two here I come! "Of course she righted her self before she hit the wall and did a back flip to stop from injuring herself" This is a ...

Hi, Lau here. This is good, some little things I'll point out in a few minutes, but those are teachable things. You made it interesting and quick, and I wanted ...

Hi... My emotions were so happy in the beggining, loving how you started it, with fireworks and tongs. And then, you make me sad! With a dead mother and an ...

This is not a review. I enjoyd this a lot and that's why I have nothing to reviw. (Also, I'm not very good at it.) "So I’m here because I’m ...

Hello! I love the topic. It's interesting and this is a cool plot. I just want to point out a few rushed parts. "That's when they both bumped into each ...