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Re: Stained Rose - Prologue
Oooooh, this is dark, lol. Okay, so some thoughts! 1. Their gun safety is really... lacking? Honestly the fact that Marie would tackle Rosalie while she is holding a gun ...
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Re: devotee.
Oooooooh. This doesn't have the same sort of Western World flair that I'm used to, with its primarily Christian religion. As a Catholic, the sort of imagery and language we ...
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Re: folklore fanfic
Oh my goodness, hahaha. Cheaters gonna cheat. Still, I'm glad he got his comeuppance, lol. Okay, so some thoughts! I am not sure which Taylor Swift song this is about ...
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Re: the vocabulary of missing you
Hiiiiii Lavvie! *attacks* Okay, maybe I know too much about you (omg, how are you almost thirty now, you were a KID when we first met... we are so old, ...
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Re: Forever Memory
Awww this is a sad poem. :'( Anyway, here's some thoughts... I loved the lines that just embodied catdom. So like... My protector fierce, from shadows' fright, We chased the ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 6
First, she challenged the staff. Starting with minor acts of defiance, like being late to dinner or roaming the garden past curfew. Then it escalated to the most ambitious test, ...
Oct 17, 2025 -
Re: The memories I spent with you chapter 1
Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Okay so! I always love a good romance, so I figured I would take a look and give a quick review! :D First... ahhhhh! ...
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Re: Tired
Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Oof, I have to say I am glad whenever any attempted suicide goes awry. Life gets better... trust me! Okay, so things I liked... ...
Oct 17, 2025 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 5
Hello again! *chews on story* "This certainly feels like a prison," Lydia grumbled. Okay but... wasn't she literally imprisoned a couple of days ago? I think she would be able ...
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Re: Birds
Hello! As soon as I read the title, I knew I had to review this. I love birds... and poetry... it's just a thing. Okay, so this is going to ...
Oct 16, 2025 -
Re: Golden Fire
Hello Cats! Okay, I can totally envision this as a Christian rock song, so yay! Still, I would add onto it a little more. Still... I have to wonder... His ...
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Re: sharing words of pain we don't know through the mouth with a kiss
Ahhhhhh this is so cute. I love how you twisted the grotesque images of teeth/ braces /retainers so that it almost seems monstrous... and ended up with a poignant feeling ...
Oct 16, 2025 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 4
Hiiiiiii. I'm back! Though, I'm afraid my reviewing ability is rusty, haha. Still! Let's do this! :D nightmarish visions plaguing her rest I wanna see! Show us! :) While Lydia ...
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Re: Pinus
Hello redhood! :D Okay, so! This is going to sound awkward and I realize that "Pinus" is the scientific name for the Pinaceae family and this is about trees and ...
Aug 10, 2025 -
Re: and once i loved an artist
Ahhhhh this poem makes me so excited! Sometimes, especially with young poets, you'll see them use a dozen metaphors at once and it just dilutes the entire poem. Reading them, ...
Jan 31, 2025
