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  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: the vocabulary of missing you

    Hiiiiii Lavvie! *attacks* Okay, maybe I know too much about you (omg, how are you almost thirty now, you were a KID when we first met... we are so old, ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forever Memory

    Awww this is a sad poem. :'( Anyway, here's some thoughts... I loved the lines that just embodied catdom. So like... My protector fierce, from shadows' fright, We chased the ...

    Oct 25, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 6

    First, she challenged the staff. Starting with minor acts of defiance, like being late to dinner or roaming the garden past curfew. Then it escalated to the most ambitious test, ...

    Oct 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The memories I spent with you chapter 1

    Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Okay so! I always love a good romance, so I figured I would take a look and give a quick review! :D First... ahhhhh! ...

    Oct 17, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Tired

    Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Oof, I have to say I am glad whenever any attempted suicide goes awry. Life gets better... trust me! Okay, so things I liked... ...

    Oct 17, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 5

    Hello again! *chews on story* "This certainly feels like a prison," Lydia grumbled. Okay but... wasn't she literally imprisoned a couple of days ago? I think she would be able ...

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Birds

    Hello! As soon as I read the title, I knew I had to review this. I love birds... and poetry... it's just a thing. Okay, so this is going to ...

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Golden Fire

    Hello Cats! Okay, I can totally envision this as a Christian rock song, so yay! Still, I would add onto it a little more. Still... I have to wonder... His ...

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Poetry » Health, Romantic Re: sharing words of pain we don't know through the mouth with a kiss

    Ahhhhhh this is so cute. I love how you twisted the grotesque images of teeth/ braces /retainers so that it almost seems monstrous... and ended up with a poignant feeling ...

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 4

    Hiiiiiii. I'm back! Though, I'm afraid my reviewing ability is rusty, haha. Still! Let's do this! :D nightmarish visions plaguing her rest I wanna see! Show us! :) While Lydia ...

    Oct 16, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Pinus

    Hello redhood! :D Okay, so! This is going to sound awkward and I realize that "Pinus" is the scientific name for the Pinaceae family and this is about trees and ...

    Aug 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: and once i loved an artist

    Ahhhhh this poem makes me so excited! Sometimes, especially with young poets, you'll see them use a dozen metaphors at once and it just dilutes the entire poem. Reading them, ...

    Jan 31, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Six, Water Off a Duck's Back

    OH NO. CLAUDE WHAT ARE YOU DOING???? Actually, I am kind of frustrated with everyone, hahahaha. Eveyone's gone insaaaane. Like, Claude didn't destroy the basilisk egg... which given that she ...

    Jan 14, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Five, Ruffling Feathers

    Hi Horisun! :D Okay... let's go into it, shall we?? revenant expression I... am not actually sure if I like that adjective? It's a bit of a twenty-dollar word. I ...

    Jan 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: User Manual for The Perfect Woman

    Hi Elektra! Okay, this is going to be a ridiculously dumb review, but having read too many SOPs and user manuals in my life... it isn't clear who the user ...

    Jan 10, 2025


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