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Hmmm... I get that her dying is sad, but also, I'm not certain if this particular ending is a happy ending either, just because it is so open-ended. After all, ...

...oh goodness, haha. What a strange family. Okay, so some thoughts! When I first started reading this, I was almost certain it was a horror story, not a comedy story. ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :) So! This is a very lyrical and dramatic piece that almost feels more like poetry and less like a story. Her perception of everything ...

Omg. Okay, so this is a really cool scene and I love that Anita rescues Jennifer from an obviously dire situation. Yes, Jennifer may have been captured in the movie ...

Hi Smetana! :) Okay! So I admit to have a soft spot for zombie stuff, hahaha. What can I say? After getting a degree in biochemical engineering, it's a guilty ...

Ahhhhh! Okay, so I read some of your work before, but honestly I forgot how nice of a writer you are. Everything is clean and well-edited and I really appreciate ...

Ooooo... this is clever. I like how it's a message from the shadow, who compliments her for her brightness and light. Like, the very fact that it's from her shadow ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Okay! So... I'm a parent! Have a bunch of little kids of my own. So, some thoughts coming from this perspective... - The timing ...

Oooooooh. The pressure increases! Okay... so some random thoughts! (I'm sorry... when I review novels, I'm afraid my thoughts become increasingly scattered, hahaha.) - Lawrence remarried??? I kind of

Hello! :D Ooooooh... I actually liked this chapter a lot more. Honestly, if I were writing this, I would probably get rid of the prologue and start with this instead, ...

Hello Certz! Okay, so! I actually lived in Japan for a little bit, so honestly, when I saw that this was set in Japan, I did a little happy dance ...

Hi Lunar Girl! Hmmmm... I really like the idea of this poem, especially your metaphor where you talk about how the sunset is lost to the night. That image is ...

Oooooh, this is dark, lol. Okay, so some thoughts! 1. Their gun safety is really... lacking? Honestly the fact that Marie would tackle Rosalie while she is holding a gun ...

Oooooooh. This doesn't have the same sort of Western World flair that I'm used to, with its primarily Christian religion. As a Catholic, the sort of imagery and language we ...

Oh my goodness, hahaha. Cheaters gonna cheat. Still, I'm glad he got his comeuppance, lol. Okay, so some thoughts! I am not sure which Taylor Swift song this is about ...