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Hi! I'm a Christian woman, and I have to say this is a really scattered, unorganized, unpersuasive essay about modesty and guiding women toward this virtue. You say that it ...

Hiiii Rebel! Okay, I am jumping in the middle (SORRY) and I am unsurprisingly completely lost, haha. This is my fault and I apologize. I am intrigued though... this sci ...

Hello again! :) Okay... so just some thoughts as I read through it really quick! Okay, so this is a bigggg cast and I think I am slightly overwhelmed right ...

Hmmm... I get that her dying is sad, but also, I'm not certain if this particular ending is a happy ending either, just because it is so open-ended. After all, ...

...oh goodness, haha. What a strange family. Okay, so some thoughts! When I first started reading this, I was almost certain it was a horror story, not a comedy story. ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :) So! This is a very lyrical and dramatic piece that almost feels more like poetry and less like a story. Her perception of everything ...

Omg. Okay, so this is a really cool scene and I love that Anita rescues Jennifer from an obviously dire situation. Yes, Jennifer may have been captured in the movie ...

Hi Smetana! :) Okay! So I admit to have a soft spot for zombie stuff, hahaha. What can I say? After getting a degree in biochemical engineering, it's a guilty ...

Ahhhhh! Okay, so I read some of your work before, but honestly I forgot how nice of a writer you are. Everything is clean and well-edited and I really appreciate ...

Ooooo... this is clever. I like how it's a message from the shadow, who compliments her for her brightness and light. Like, the very fact that it's from her shadow ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! :D Okay! So... I'm a parent! Have a bunch of little kids of my own. So, some thoughts coming from this perspective... - The timing ...

Oooooooh. The pressure increases! Okay... so some random thoughts! (I'm sorry... when I review novels, I'm afraid my thoughts become increasingly scattered, hahaha.) - Lawrence remarried??? I kind of

Hello! :D Ooooooh... I actually liked this chapter a lot more. Honestly, if I were writing this, I would probably get rid of the prologue and start with this instead, ...

Hello Certz! Okay, so! I actually lived in Japan for a little bit, so honestly, when I saw that this was set in Japan, I did a little happy dance ...

Hi Lunar Girl! Hmmmm... I really like the idea of this poem, especially your metaphor where you talk about how the sunset is lost to the night. That image is ...