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Hi Stella! My favorite part of this story is the descriptions of the rugged terrain that she is traversing across. It's really cool and very much science fiction and I ...

One thing that you might want to do that might make this pretty cool is to make Raven kind of sexy when doing this. She seems like she could totally ...

So, I read Chapter 1 and then, in the comments, found out that you had a prologue! So, of course I had to look! Most of it just seems like... ...

Haha! So, I clicked this because it was in the green room, but I have to say... it's delightfully bizarre, quite creative, and very fun. I think my favorite part ...

Hi! What a strange first line! You both were wonderfully creative bringing that line to life like this! :o Were you intending to write this as if it were a ...

Okay! So, first of all, I am dumb. Really, really dumb. So dumb that I was absolutely horrified by your poem. See, I hadn't really paid attention to the "zombro" ...

Hi Sophie! You're totally right. The weather is too cold and the sky's not the right hue of blue. I mean, gray? That's totally not a shade of blue! :o ...

So, this poem has been on my mind for the past couple of days, though I haven't commented on it. Honestly, it makes me kind of angry because I want ...

This is probably going to be a controversial opinion, so you should probably ignore me, but I really adore the rhyming in the second stanza and almost wish you could ...

I hate to be that person, but... I am a Diest. you mean Deist? Also, "(and as always, London prevails)" should be "(And, as always, London prevails.)" Anyway, I am ...

Hi! Okay, first of all, I'll give you a warning... I have been working on a project that goes reeeeeeeally deeply into the Passion using art and whatnot, so that ...

This is a really cute poem that reminds me of some of the children's poems that I would read when I was younger -- something quick, clever, and has a ...

Hi niteowl! I... actually really like this poem because it describes what I've been slogging through for quite sometime. Which is a little funny, now that I glance at the ...

I'm not sure what angle you're going with this poem... it's so short, it's hard to tell, quite honestly! Still, it seems kind of like you're being darkly sarcastic, which ...

Hi, dystopianmonkey! One of the interesting things about this particular haiku (or senryu?) is the second line, where you talk about the dust of deception. The interesting bit is that ...