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Unorthodox comments for the win! XD I kind of agree with everybody here. I like your other poem a million times more, but this one is okay and I want ...

I actually really like that line that empress pointed out. I think it's clever. So definitely keep that! :) First! A little question: I'm walking for miles on my broken ...

Hey, CJ... welcome to YWS! :D Oy, hopefully this isn't autobiographical! Poetry takes a bit to learn. My best advice is to read lots of poetry, figure out what you ...

Hey Angel, welcome to YWS! Hope to see you on later. :) My favorite verse is this, actually: Beyond a mini-skirt lies ecstasy and divine galore; the devil laughs with ...

XD This made my day. Anyway, my favorite stanza was the last one. You don't know this, but the precursor to the evil minions was SPEW... and we used to ...

Hey Redbird! One thing that really seemed strange was the amount of passive voice vs. active voice and your use of adjectives and adverbs. And, just in case I sound ...

Hello! This might be because I'm from California, but isn't the internet in your library... free? I mean, it's timed and limited over here, but you don't have to pay ...

Hello there! I like the idea and such. The image of the broken bones scattered everywhere was cool, and let's face it... monsters eating up people is a subject which ...

This sounds more like a blog than an actual work, if that makes sense. There are a lot of people that make subtly humorous and quirky blogs all the time ...

Hi Margaret! :D One of things I found weird was that they really didn't want to seem separated! So I have to wonder... with everything gone, why would they separate ...

Haha, this reminds me of a song called, "Woman in Chains." It goes like this: You better love loving you better behave You better love loving you better behave Woman ...

Whoa, calm down. If you want reviews, the best thing to do is to review other people. You'll get noticed a LOT easier. :P Anyway... there are a lot of ...

Hi Mentalist! :) I just wanted to ask a bunch of questions which will hopefully be helpful. First of all, I kind of think it's strange. He's a pick pocket ...

Lovely poem! :) I like most of it, but there was a line that I didn't quite enjoy... Just a handful of sand to thrust The way you're using this ...

LOL! Clever way to satirize it all... I find it especially humorous that your reviewers generally didn't catch the satire. ;) My main problem was this: (an inappropriately repugnant word ...