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Re: Through those Doors
Hello! Happy review day! I'm not too good at reviewing free-verse, but I'll give it a whirl! :D 1. Sometimes repetition in a poem can be one of the best ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Northeast: Chapter 2 [Second Draft]
Hello! Happy review day! :D This is a really interesting piece, and I LOVE it! To be quite honest, I can't find much with this! I agree with Ripple - ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Quest for Fire Book Three ~ Touch the Sky Chapter 5
Hello! Snazzy here for a review! There were a couple of grammar mistakes, but not too many - so I'm going to assume they were just typos, and not lack ...
Aug 24, 2016 -
Re: The Legend Keepers: PhoenixSight Chapter 3
Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D "Please, don't freak out," Warren said. This may just be me being totally oblivious to dialogue, but it seems like before, Warren was ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Not *quite* knights
Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! The first really big thing I noticed is that every time a new character talks (well, thinks at least), a new paragraph isn't ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Luminous (Old Version)
Hello! I'm going along the rule of "compliment and criticize", so my compliments and critiques might be a little out of order. ;) Anyway, let's get started! The Forge wasn’t ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Brown Eyes
Hello! Let me first say, I absolutely adore works written from the perspective of an inanimate object. I actually tried this once (with a baseball), although it was humorous instead ...
Aug 22, 2016 -
Re: I wish I had wings
Hello, Spartan118! :D Snazzy here for a review! First off, I must say, the idea of this poem is nice. It's pleasant. It's one that I have thought of many ...
Aug 19, 2016 -
Re: Dragonet SnowBall Fight
Hi Felistia! I owe you, like, a BAZILLION reviews! :D It's been a while since I've reviewed regularly though, and an even longer while since I've reviewed one of your ...
Aug 15, 2016 -
Re: The Crossing
First of all, I want to apologize ahead of time for any spelling errors in this. I'm typing on my phone, and it's SUPER hard. :D Anyway, let's get started! ...
Jul 23, 2016 -
Re: Painted: 1.0.7
Hello, Kaila! First off, I must say this is a fabulous idea. I think with some determination and elbow grease, the idea might be pulled off! ;) Anyway, time for ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: All Is Lost - Prologue
iHola! Hi Keepwriting! Snazzy here for a review! :D I don't remember ever reading much of your longer works, although I have read a poem or two. I haven't reviewed ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: Every object tells a story!
Hello, hello, hello! Snazzy here for a review! Alrighty, there are just 3 or 4 large things that I have to say about your poem, and what I found: Numero ...
Mar 24, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 34
Hi Falconer! This is literally one of my favorite chapters yet! I'm glad to see you were able to use one of my ideas. You wrote it far better than ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 33
Hello! (Written before I read the entire thing- OH I LOVE YOU FOR BRINGING HIM BACK. OH THANK YOU... You did the right thing.) So yeah. I read the ending ...
Mar 7, 2016
