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Hello! :D I love this poem!! :D :D :D This is EXACTLY how I feel about MY mind!! :) "But in fantasies I'd dig inside my skull pull out my ...

Hello! :D This is hilarious! "Lily picked up the nearest object-a knife- and threw it at Kiro." OH MY GOSH! SHE THREW A KNIFE AT HIS HEAD!! :D :) (is ...

Hello! :) I love this! Honestly I do!! The name is very appropriate. I only have a couple of nitpicks on this..... "I feel broken and empty with knowledge that ...

Hello! :) I really like the start to this! It is a little short, but it's okay for the beginning. I can't wait to see what will happen next. I ...

Hello! :D I do agree that you should put this in another category. Maybe poetry>narrative>humor or something like that. :) At first I was thinking that this was just realistic, ...

I agree with BookWolf! :D :) I loved this! Really funny!! :D I can't find anything wrong with this!! :D "The little girl smiled even though she had no idea ...

Hey BookWolf! :D I just have to tell you beforehand, I LOVE the name Kasmira. I think I'll name one of my kids Kasmira.....or one of my dogs or cats..... ...

I'm going to guess fire. (I wouldn't be surprised if I were wrong, I am horrible at riddles! :D :D ) I did enjoy this poem! :D ......wait.....*looks down at ...

Hello! :D I am on the edge of my seat!!! :D I love this, and the idea. Besides what others said, I only have one little nitpick. In paragraph 15, ...

Hello Bookwolf! :D This is a wonderful start to a book! :D I think you should continue it! I only have a couple little nitpicks... "Its getting late," Huge said ...

Hello! :D I really love this poem! :) Awesome! :D I only have one little nitpick. "A giraffe is awkward, But I am too. I'll continue to grow Just to ...

Hello!! :D :D This was a great short story!! :D I could really tell what the moral was! :D I only have a couple of nitpicks though...... (I do understand ...

Hello! :D :D SnazzyPencil here for a review! :) I only found a couple of nitpicks... "who are you?" who should be Who. "this isn't funny" this should be This. ...

Hello! :D :D I really love this poem!! :) I really couldn't find anything besides the 'comma thing' that pendr pointed out. I like how you ended with the same ...

Hello Bookwolf! :D :D No typos in this one!!! None at all!!! Thanks for putting the pronunciations of your character's names at the top!! I was pronouncing Rune's name wrong!! ...