Riddle

by BookWolf

Published November 11, 2014

E - Everyone

In Peotry

I breathe air,

and release it in heavy fumes.

I sizzle beneath a cold hand,

and intoxicate all who breathe me in.

My fumes are like a deadly breath of poison,

they cloud vision,

and can be used to signal for help.

Or maybe to keep unwanted company away.

I sound like a dry leaf being stepped upon,

and I have a smell that all with recognize,

for I am deadly, and many flee before me,

afraid that I may cast my hurt upon them.

I am dangerous.

I spread quickly, especially in times of drought.

My long fingers reach and stretch,

desperate to destroy something else.

But the irony of it all is,

I am also life.

Without me, nothing would be alive today.

I am the very core of this world.

Now tell me,

What am I?


Author's Note: I understand that this is probably VERY easy to guess, but I thought it was worth publishing anyway. I hope you guys enjoy it! :D

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emeraldfox
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emeraldfox wrote a review Review · Nov 15, 2014

Ooh! Fire?!?! This is probably the only riddle I've ever successfuly solved without any guidance. I thought you hade some really good word choice and imagery in this poem. I liked how you talked about the irony of fire: deadly, yet life-giving and life-saving. This was really interesting! Nice job! I didn't have any technical corrections to give.

Lol :D Yes, it's fire. Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you liked it. :D

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godlypopo
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godlypopo wrote a review Review · Nov 14, 2014

I love this! I like how it is obvious yet difficult at the same time. I think that my favourite thing about this is that it's words and clues keep the reader reading as they sit on the edge of the seat, guessing and enjoying the riddle. The grammar in this is also pretty good as you use interesting words like unwanted and intoxicate. I have no nitpicks or problems that I can find hurray! :) I would guess but unfortunately I read the comments before reviewing...oops! :p
An amazing poem!
Thats all from me,
Godly :D

Haha, :D thanks so much for the review.

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Snazzy
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Snazzy wrote a review Review · Nov 12, 2014

I'm going to guess fire. (I wouldn't be surprised if I were wrong, I am horrible at riddles! :D :D ) I did enjoy this poem! :D ......wait.....*looks down at other comments/reviews* *realizes Kelpies has gotten the correct answer* Well, at least I know I have gotten the right answer! :D I really like it! Good job, and keep writing!! :D :D
-Snazzy :D

Lol :D Thanks for the review. <3

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Kelpies
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Kelpies commented Comment · Nov 11, 2014

Fire?

Yay! XD

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Collideascope
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Collideascope commented Comment · Nov 11, 2014

Great riddle! I was leaning towards dragon but then I read the comments. I still don't feel stupid however because dragons are cool.

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Audy
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Audy commented Comment · Nov 11, 2014

Bookwolf!

I'm sorry, but I have a fundamental disagreement with this poem:

I sizzle beneath a cold hand,

and intoxicate all who breathe me in.


if I were to breathe fire, I'd be a dragon! And how cool would that be? <3

:) This was fun. Riddles like these are great practice, I think, just the way that the subject personifies itself and the inventiveness in the point of view and metaphors. Write more.

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WritinginRome
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WritinginRome commented Comment · Nov 11, 2014

fire i'm guessing, due to the smoke signal and forest fire references?
lovely though

Correct! :D <3

Aww and im usually so crappy at riddles! yay!

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Indrashish
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Indrashish wrote a review Review · Nov 11, 2014

Let me take a guess.... Volcano? It can't be cigarette since it only takes life, does not give...
Okay...if my guess is right or close, your poetic parameters are amazing, let me tell you that... your poem has a good flow and feel... its an absolute bliss reading your poem...
I have nothing to criticize about your poem...
Keep writing!! :)

Hehe, you're really close. :D

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Astronaut
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Astronaut commented Comment · Nov 11, 2014

Cigarette? Or just fire? I guessed cigarette because you were saying how toxic it is...

Well, its not a cigarette because they don't create life. :D Your other answer is correct though.



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