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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lies

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! :3 So, I haven't reviewed poetry in a (very long) while, but I'll give it my best shot! The first thing I noticed, was that ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Teardrops in the Flowers

    Hello, Snazzy here for a review! Short stories like these are always refreshing to read, and I must say, for the most part, your story was too! Anyway, on with ...

    Feb 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Madly: Chapter 1

    Hi Steggy! I see you're doing LMS! may the odds be every in your favor I'll try my best to give you some good feedback (but fair warning, I haven't ...

    Feb 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Science Fiction Re: Son, Chapter 1: Cove (revised)

    Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! I haven't done this in a while, so this might be a little rusty... (Also a side note that I'll be mixing in ...

    Feb 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Knowing Gods Prologue- The new arrival

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :D The first thing I notice is your description. I think it's on the borderline of being too much, but in general it's pretty ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Most Complex Poem

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! :D So I have reviewed maybe one or two pieces like this, and although I am not too good ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: 2 am

    Hello, mckeownm! First things first, welcome to YWS! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me! :D Anyway, let's dive into the review then, shall we? I could ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: My Grandpa Is Dead

    You know, I always somewhat dislike reviewing pieces like these. I know every writers' works come from the heart, but there's just that fragment that comes from loss. And as ...

    Jan 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Popcorn

    Hello! Let me first say, there are some very good points in this! Your imagery was pretty good at times, and I can tell that you were trying to appeal ...

    Jan 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Murder

    Hello! Snazzy here for a review! Good story line, for starters. Really nice twist ending! The flow is pretty good overall. A really good start! This has lots of potential! ...

    Jan 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Revenant Rising 1.3: Ocean of the Sun

    Hello! The very first thing I notice is how choppy it is. Specifically, it goes from one thing to another very rapidly, with no clear change that I can see. ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Ticket to Trust CH. 2 - Ruby Springs

    Hello! I haven't reviewed in a while, so this might be really rough... Anyway, I'll get on with it (and try my best to give you a good review)! “Grr…” ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: the first 1000 words of ma second book

    Hello! First off, I must ask, have you ever read Salt to the Sea by Ruta Sepetys? She wrote in a similar style, and I must say, I really do ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Forget Me

    Hello CClesta! :D Snazzy here for a review! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you really enjoy it here! Second, good job on this piece! I really did enjoy ...

    Dec 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lestrade's Riders (Chapter 2)

    Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! First off, I really like the title of your novel, as well as the title of your chapter! Both provide an idea of ...

    Nov 26, 2016


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