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I love this article. I think more topics like this should be discussed. Girls have such a tough time fitting into this image society expects them to be. Anything less ...

Blood red moon, I like that. There's something very ominous about the way it sounds. I also liked the line you chose to reuse, "pen in hand". It flowed nice. ...

I liked this a lot. Was it purely fictional? Or was this something you went through? Either way, I like your realistic perspective on writing this. I think you could ...

This was pretty cool as far as "different" goes. Your title drew me in mostly. I loved the opening part a lot. This part confused me a little though: Your ...

Hello Kslaught. Here to lend a review for your poem. :) First off, I think that your poem had some lovely points. However, I feel this poem could have also ...

This is truly a great story you have here. I read every chapter from the beginning up until this one here. I really want to read more. I hope this ...

This is a memory you say? Interesting. Very interesting. I wonder what it's about, really. Your way of expressing this was very poetic. I think it's what I enjoyed most ...

I have a question. Is this suppose to be part of a bigger story? I think this here was an interesting read. Although, it felt as though some ends were ...

Hello Hayden, here to review this for you. I have to admit, I was anticipating some deeper meaning when I first read through this poem the first time. But then ...

Personally, I found this very interesting to read. It had that little something in it that keeps my attention flowing throughout the entire thing up until the very end. Your ...

This was pretty interesting. Overall, I think your plot is cool. Sort of morbid and creepy. Good job with the weird! ;) However, I found that some of your sentences ...

This... was ingenious. Foolproof intelligent. I loved it. You had a very clever way with words throughout the entire thing. It was so complete. The only part I have to ...

I was feeling pretty damn confident about commenting on this one. Had all these great things to say. Then I scrolled all the way down the page and saw the ...

This was really artistically colorful, aside from being obviously a poem about color. I liked reading it. (: It was enjoyable. You seem to be well partnered up. What you ...

Hello BugBug. Here to lend an honest review for you today (: First off, I would say even for a prologue this could be a lot longer. There wasn't that ...