Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
I’m Amber. Amber Powers. My life isn’t the normal kind of life you know about. I’m the youngest out of my four sisters. Louisa is the eldest, but Cassie is the most responsible. Cassie is already a Mum to two-year-old Kieron, who in fact, now I mention it, is extremely good for his Mum. Me, not so much.
Anyway, Cassie is expecting a baby girl soon. She’s twenty-four weeks along, and I’m very excited for my third niece to come. I already have twin niece’s Katie and Bethanie, who belong to Louisa.
That reminds me, Louisa’s getting married in December to this really friendly guy called John. He already has a four-year-old little boy called Matthew and his work mates son is joining my school next term. I haven’t met him, but I can tell he’s going to be a nice boy. John has a good taste in friends, so I’m excited to see what this Taylor boy looks like. Only five more days until we return school. Wish me luck.
Okay...well, this is off to an interesting start here. For being a prologue this one isn't quite as exciting as most prologues tend to be nor does this one really have all that much to get our attention here. Usually in a prologue you'd expect to see a bit of a hook or something that makes you excited to read more..but here the closest thing that we manage to get is the whole piece about how this person does not live a normal life, but even though that got set up really early it didn't really get paid off at all in the rest of the work and overall, that alone really doesn't anything at all to the piece.
Soo...it sounds like a really interesting family that you've managed to create here and well I do love to see some detailed worldbuilding like this plus just stories with nice supportive families like this are always quite wholesome to read, but as far as getting the reader interesting in wanting there's something lacking here...the descriptions are relatively vague and they just won't be enough here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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