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Re: Personal Hell
I know that this is an opinionated poem, but I absolutely love it! And totally agree with it I thought that this was a great poem and a great read, ...
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Re: A Crumbled Paper
I'm just gonna go ahead and review this. I'll do like a paragraph type of review. I thought this was a really good idea and it turned out to be ...
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Re: The Wanderer
Hey I'm going to review this! I'm going stanza to stanza! First Stanza This is the first poem I've reviewed with this type of writing and I must say I ...
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Re: Whose Pages Burn With These Attempts to Scrawl?
Hey Rydia! I'm going to give this a go! I normally review stanza to stanza but I'm just going to try to give a full straight review. I hope it ...
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Re: Back In Black
Hey I'm going to review this, it's my last review this review day. Go team Dory/Blue! XP Okay now that my moments over I should get real serious now. This ...
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Re: He Fell
Hey! I'm just reviewing your work like crazy!! XP Hopefully you get something out of it. XD So I'm just gonna go ahead and shoot a review. I think that ...
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Re: Sadness to Sunrise
Hey I'm gonna just do a quick full review here. So first off I thought that you did a good job overall. I thought it was cool that you wrote ...
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Re: Bracelet Connextion
You can never have too many reviews right? Hehe. Well, I'm going to review this! I won't make it too long I promise. First Stanza I really like your opening ...
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Re: I Once Believed
This is SO beautiful!!!!!! I read this and it made me so inspired! I love this! I do have one suggestion to start out with though and that is to ...
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Re: "It's Fine"
Okay as I was reading this the one thought that came through my head was, this is so romantic, and so true, and such a struggle and so sad. And ...
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Re: I Flew Over The Cuckoo's Nest
Hey friend! Imma gonna review this! XD Okay. I thought this was a very interesting piece. I definitely think that your start was really good! I liked how it started ...
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Re: Hipsters and Goldfish
Hey! Here to give a review! I'm gonna go stanza to stanza. First Stanza Wow, it has a fantastic rhythm. It also has seemingly a lot of meaning and I ...
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Re: We're Just Fine
Hey Writing Wolf! I'm gonna review this, go team Dory! XD I go stanza to stanza. First Stanza I like this stanza I think that it's strange but not in ...
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Re: Holographic
Hey AJT!!! This was so cool! I'm going to try to do a review. haha. I'm not really use to reviewing lyrics although I have done it before/like it. First ...
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Re: Submerged
I'mma going to do a review, go blue! XD Hey, I thought this was really unique! I do have some advice though. First off I liked the way you did ...
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