SirTobes

Hey. Great piece. Great word use and description and grammar and spelling and emotion and argh! So good. There isn't anything 'missing' from this poem. It's great and you did ...

Hey, Tobes here with your review (Go RED!) Annnnyway... I really like this poem. It's sweet, it's well written, planned and presented. Your Grammar was good but I don't think ...

Hey Scar. Great piece you have here. It reminds me of being a little kid, for soem strange reason, and being scared of everything. Anyway, Lesdoit. This piece is really ...

Hey ShapeShifter, nice piece you got here. It really started to get exciting at the end Anyway, to the point. This chapter is quite interesting. It starts off a bit ...

Nice piece! This really gave me the creeps, Inwas engrossed in the horror. You know when something is so scary, you want to stop watching or reading, but you can't? ...

This is just a quick comment. I think this is a great piece, lots of emotion in it and all. You juts need to add capitals for each line!

Wow. That is really it. I like to give constructive critiscm in my comments on works, but today, what is there to criticize. It is all perfect. Idea. Description. Emotion. ...

Hehe. Very...empty. Keep writing! Toby.

Why?

I quote Pip from Charles Dickens Great Expectations: "You know nothing about men...". Obviously there was a Mrs Haversham after that, but that is besides the point. The point is, ...

Hi, so I generally enjoyed this, although it did fail to capture me. The lanuage is great, the format is terrfic, but ina ll honesty, to me it's bland. It ...

Hi Arah! As requested. So, I really enjoyed this, it was action all the way, just what I love. Today, I will review in order the story is in, not ...

Hi Alfonso! As requested! So, I really enjoyed thisin all, but there are some things you can work on to really make this piece light up. Firstly, to the not ...

Hi Jordan, Toby here! Down to business. Firstly, who is Esther, a boy or girl? How old is Esther? You need to cover these things earlier on. Secondly, you need ...

Hey Catherine, nice story, nice feel. It gave a sort of bubbly feeling, only the bubbles were slowly popping into unexistence, in a good way, because right at the end ...