Sionarama

"there are very few, if any, errors." ...sorry! I just had to correct my mistake.

Thank you so much Tori! This was something I have been just playing around with. I wrote beforehand another scene (you can look at it and review it if you ...

I loved this poem! It was very whimsical and vague (in all the right favorite types of poem! The only critique I have is that maybe you should have a ...

Thank you for that informative post! I've just been trying out the 5/7/5 lines for a poem. What would you consider this poem to be?

It is a haiku. They are only three lines long.

I'm really sorry! I didn't know how to delete a post

Yay, first comment! Shadow, thank you so much for instilling confidence in me with this poem. At first I was afraid it was not well written since no one had ...

Thank you very much MorningStar! I did in fact leave punctuation out on purpose so thank you for noticing. :)

Oh right! Okay! You rocked though!!

Amazing analogies and rhymes! Perfect in all the right places. Never would have thought of the ocean like a lion. Keep writing!

Your poem made me read it a second time and I found that it was about two lovers, one in Heaven and one in Hell. I got it now. I ...

Very funny! I loved it. Nice third person, humorous and nice parallelism! Was this actually a paper? Because if it was, I would give it an 'A'. One problem though, ...

Great poem AhmadBlues! Very deep. About first being in Hell and then Heaven, I take it? The stanzas and rhymes were a bit forced and you might want to review ...

Hi Laloifi! As I was browsing through the Browse I saw this cute little title and decided to read it. When I first started reading it the first stanza just ...

Hi Penguin! I'm here to review your work! Okay, let us start off with a bit of the good, then some bad (if there is any), and then last of ...