Sionarama

This is an awesome follow up to your first chapter! I really enjoy how you realistically portray the characters' actions. Skylar is a great main character who seems to know ...

Hiya GossipGirl! Just wanted to talk about your awesome beginning to a great story! I was immediately captured by what was happening in the first paragraph. I have always struggled ...

Hiya, Anna! This is the cutest children's story! I love the rhyming and repetition. It is the sweetest little message, too. I feel inspired to help other people out! I ...

Hello Persy, These are some really interesting and lyrical paragraphs. They have the rhythm and language I would normally associate with a poem, but the depth and detail of a ...

Hi Breaking! I'm just going to jump right into this: This to me doesn't seem as much of a prologue but comes across as that paragraph on the back of ...

Hi Lilchoma! I'm (obviously) hear to review your (amazing!) poem, Alright, from what you might have already guessed, I found this poem amazing. Here are some of the reasons why: ...

Hi Petals! This was a very nice poem. Rhyming is not my thing usually (if I do, it sounds like nonsense) so kudos for that. You kept the pace of ...

Wow this is a great poem! When I was reading it, I was reminded of greek tragedy verses (the writing style and the greek deity additions) and simultaneously of Edgar ...

Emily, that was perfect! Every paragraph, sentence, word, detail was perfect. I had not checked the username of the person who wrote this so when I was reading this I ...

Hi Wordsandwishes! I was very interested in this poem. It has thought-provoking stanzas and words. Poems whose meanings are abstract are my favorite poems because there could be many things ...

Ah, great work MorningStar! This story was very sweet with great realistic attributes to it (the morphine, the biting of the tongue, the hospital) and a lyrical way of congratulations! ...

Very interesting and bitter-sweet piece. I like how the conflict is not centered around the mother's death but around the superstition. It makes me wonder how superstitions affect my life ...

Interesting read! What I really found you could do was keep me guessing the entire way through the poem and keep me thinking about it afterward. It is complex but ...

This is amazing work! I am very impressed by your eye for detail and the voice that is in this writing. It's definitely a cliff hanger and I cannot wait ...

Yay Judy! Woohoo! Great story as always. You have a knack for writing in your character's voices perfectly and making the job of being a Jedi and its politics easy ...