Siobhanoshea

I think this is really good because you kept it simple and straightforward. No fancy words and symbolism, it just says what you mean. The only thing I would really ...

I really like this. I love the idea of writing something when you're not quite right. I think it makes us vulnerable and honest. There's no over thinking it, the ...

I completely agree with Kaylyn's structure idea. I think it would be brilliant with this poem. There are a few minor grammar things, like capitalizing the "i" and adding the ...

I think the first two stanzas are wonderful. I really enjoyed the rhyming scheme you used too. I'd look again just at the last stanza. On it's own I don't ...

In the second to last one, my only criticism would be to find a new word for soar. I think the repetition of "life" is purposeful, but "soar" doesn't. I'd ...

Wow. This has just got to strike a chord within everyone. Kicking yourself forever because of the chance you didn't take, and how it can come back and hurt so ...

I absolutely relate to your opening lines. I stopped and read them again before even continuing with the poem. I Had to take a moment and absorb it. Those two ...

Something about this is fascinating. It's hard for me to focus on your specific word choices and give criticism because I am totally absorbed reading it. Grabbed all of me. ...

I think the beginning of this is absolutely wonderful, all the up to "he's the wrong Father," but The rest of this stanza was boring compared with the rest of ...

I think this is a really impressive piece of work. It seemed to creep up on me. The language is not overly flowery, which I appreciate. Simplicity is beautiful. And ...

Wow. I adore the last two lines of this. Really breath taking. Honestly. I don't know if you had a reason to do this, but in the beginning you speak ...

I do not suffer from depression, but I have an anxiety disorder. When it's coming I feel it creeping up on me well before it hits. I think you captured ...