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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 3.1 [SCRAPPED]

    Thanks for mentioning me when you posted this, I really appreciate it! Anywho, let's get straight to it, eh? I have to say that so far, I think this has ...

    Oct 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: 1

    Hey Ehtaniel, as promised I'm here to check out your novel (obviously starting with the virst chapter!) So this was interesting! As previous reviewers have said, I wasn't expecting the ...

    Oct 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Opening Paragraph to My Novel

    Hey emjayc, here for a quick review! The Earth trembled underneath him as if rattling its final breath before surrendering to the lightning clashes above. For the purpose of making ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 2.2

    I'm not stalking you, I swear. So this was another good chapter, in my opinion, and I really like that we saw another side to Jazai's personality. So far ce's ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 2.1

    Me again :wink: So this was quite a bit shorter than the last chapter, which I'm assuming because this is only the first half of chapter two. This review may ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    Hey there! I was craving to write a review and browsing through the 'books' tab when I came across the second chapter of this novel, and it looked cool so ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Eleanor's Remarkable and Infinite Bucket List {2}

    Me again! :wink: I'll get straight into it, methinks. "I applied for a scholarship though. Scotland for a year, no looking back." Pfft, Scotland is poo. Come to Wales, duh. ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Eleanor's Remarkably Infinite Bucket List {1}

    Hola! So I've not written a review in well over a year, but I'm kinda sorta returning to YWS, so I figured I'd kick that off with one! So basically ...

    Oct 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four

    Hey Sushi, here I am as requested! Sorry I've taken a little while, I've been busy lately with starting back at college, but I've finally managed to find myself some ...

    Sep 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 3

    Me again, mwahahahaha! Righteo, so I see you already have some pretty awesome reviews on this. As a result, I do apologise if mine ends up a little redundant or ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Hey Sushi, here to review as requested! :) This is a pretty short chapter overall, so I apologise in advance if my review is lacking at all. Anyways, I thought ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 2

    I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! 'Sup. So this was a really cool chapter. As I am a freakoid adrenaline junkie, the ending of this chapter made me so happy with all its dun ...

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 1

    So because you've been absolutely awesomesauce with my novel, I want to repay you by reviewing yours! And so, I shall le begin. I hated reading. I absolutely couldn't stand ...

    Aug 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Boy

    Hey EmoChik! You only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July (as this is the only work in your portfolio), so here I am to give ...

    Aug 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: Paradise

    Hey there Dreamer, you only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July, so here I am to give you your second review! :) So I actually ...

    Aug 8, 2013


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