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Re: Balance - Chapter 3.1 [SCRAPPED]
Thanks for mentioning me when you posted this, I really appreciate it! Anywho, let's get straight to it, eh? I have to say that so far, I think this has ...
Oct 12, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey Ehtaniel, as promised I'm here to check out your novel (obviously starting with the virst chapter!) So this was interesting! As previous reviewers have said, I wasn't expecting the ...
Oct 12, 2014 -
Re: Opening Paragraph to My Novel
Hey emjayc, here for a quick review! The Earth trembled underneath him as if rattling its final breath before surrendering to the lightning clashes above. For the purpose of making ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 2.2
I'm not stalking you, I swear. So this was another good chapter, in my opinion, and I really like that we saw another side to Jazai's personality. So far ce's ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 2.1
Me again :wink: So this was quite a bit shorter than the last chapter, which I'm assuming because this is only the first half of chapter two. This review may ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]
Hey there! I was craving to write a review and browsing through the 'books' tab when I came across the second chapter of this novel, and it looked cool so ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Eleanor's Remarkable and Infinite Bucket List {2}
Me again! :wink: I'll get straight into it, methinks. "I applied for a scholarship though. Scotland for a year, no looking back." Pfft, Scotland is poo. Come to Wales, duh. ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Eleanor's Remarkably Infinite Bucket List {1}
Hola! So I've not written a review in well over a year, but I'm kinda sorta returning to YWS, so I figured I'd kick that off with one! So basically ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four
Hey Sushi, here I am as requested! Sorry I've taken a little while, I've been busy lately with starting back at college, but I've finally managed to find myself some ...
Sep 3, 2013 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 3
Me again, mwahahahaha! Righteo, so I see you already have some pretty awesome reviews on this. As a result, I do apologise if mine ends up a little redundant or ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three
Hey Sushi, here to review as requested! :) This is a pretty short chapter overall, so I apologise in advance if my review is lacking at all. Anyways, I thought ...
Aug 13, 2013 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 2
I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! 'Sup. So this was a really cool chapter. As I am a freakoid adrenaline junkie, the ending of this chapter made me so happy with all its dun ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 1
So because you've been absolutely awesomesauce with my novel, I want to repay you by reviewing yours! And so, I shall le begin. I hated reading. I absolutely couldn't stand ...
Aug 11, 2013 -
Re: The Boy
Hey EmoChik! You only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July (as this is the only work in your portfolio), so here I am to give ...
Aug 8, 2013 -
Re: Paradise
Hey there Dreamer, you only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July, so here I am to give you your second review! :) So I actually ...
Aug 8, 2013
