SilverBerry

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Oh that's really interesting! Thanks for explaining.

I see now that you're right! Thanks for the advice!

Hi GreatKing! Thanks for the review and for telling me about the commas. I do this mistake a lot in my poetry (which isn't good) so thank you for pointing ...

PHANDOM YESSS LET US UNITE

What a coincidence (a sad one) this was a poem about MY grandmother who also had Alzheimer's. Thank you for the suggestions and review!

Thank you Cupcake Queen for the review! And yes, this was about my deceased Grandmother. Though, she died a few years ago (so not very recently). I was simply going ...

You know, now that I think about it, I probably should've waited a bit to do this during review day. OH WELL! :D

Thanks for the review, Mavery! I like your suggestion about the friend's point of view and of course I'm glad you liked my poem. The last line of the poem ...

Yeah, I wanted to add more to the poem, but not everyone has read Blood of Olympus so I didn't want to spoil it...

Ahhh! I just realized that they weren't separated into sections, they were supposed to be. I'll fix that. Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the review! It's greatly appreciated. And yes, we're trying to work on our details of the scenery considering that we rather rushed it.

Well, we were supposed to write about a special spot, and I was writing about sitting ON my tree. XD That's why I fall sometimes.

That's a great ending! It really lets the reader think! Also, nice doctor who reference!

Yeah...I guess reviewing our own work isn't fair...