SilverBerry

Hi! Bla here! Awesome story, sad ending but still really good! I liked how you introduced the drama and climatic scenes, and I just overall enjoyed it. Unfortunately there ARE ...

Hiii! Bla here! I'm pretty sure this is your first poem so good job! Anyways, I really love the message you are trying to convey, and I think that you ...

Hey! Blablabl92 here! I really like this poem, and I love all your juicy descriptions! (That sounded kinda creepy, sorry) But perhaps you might want to add punctuation and change ...

Hello friend! Blablabl92 here! Great poem, and I know all about your handwriting when you show me your newly written works. I think the last line really describes it. :D ...

Hey Blablabl92 here! This is going to be a short review, but I hope it's helpful! Great poem! A little dreary but I really liked it! I expected a gloomy, ...

Hi friend! Blablabl92 here! Awesome poem! Even if Sherlock causes me suffering, I still love it, as I love this poem! And who doesn't adore Benedict Cumberbatch? Okay, few things ...

Hey! Blablabl92 here! Another great chapter! I'm really liking this so far! "'What have you done to yourself?' He questioned. He ran over to me and grabbed my shirt. 'What ...

Hi! Blablabl92 here! Great story so far! You really have a wonderful eye for detail, and I love all your metaphors and similes. Okay, the first paragraph was great, so ...

Hey! Blablabl92 here! Great poem! Kinda dark, but still great! It really made me think and go over the words throughout my brain. I really liked it! I also really ...

Hi! Blablabl92 here! Great poem! I found it very formal and dramatic, and that was great! As I was reading, I found "As gasps painted her halls blood red." So ...

Hi blablabl92 here! This poem, short as it is, was very beautiful! For some reason it gave me a nostalgic feeling, as well as a cozy, warm feel. Good job! ...

Hi! Blablabl92 here! So this poem was a bit...disturbing considering about war and stuff, but I still think it was written very well. I loved all the details and the ...

Hi! Blablabl92 here! So I started to read this poem thinking this was about cheerful things like hide and seek...then I continued to read and boy, was I wrong. XD ...

Hi! Blablabl92 here! I really like your poem, its hilarious and I especially like the ending. Who doesn't like humorous poetry? Anyways, the only things that you might want to ...

Hey! Blablabl92 here! I like the poem! It's simple, but good! I like that you contrasted living in the light and living in the dark. The only thing I would ...