SilverBerry

Hi! SilverBerry here for a review! This poem is absolutely wonderful, you have a great outlook, your tone is very clear throughout the poem, and you incorporated a consistent rhyme ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! I actually really love this poem, for mental illness in teenagers is suddenly becoming much more common (which is terrible) and I see it ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! You're a very talented writer from what I see and your metaphors are on point and your theme is very unique and relatable. I ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! I'm going to review as I read so my personal opinions will be at the bottom! Note that I'm trying to be picky so ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! I like the poem you have here, it's very relatable and cute and you have great descriptions. I noticed you're quite good with hyperboles, ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! So far I'm enjoying your story, for I like that you've decided to steer away from some fantasy clichés, and that's good. Your tone ...

Hello! Silverberry here for a review! I noticed that you're new to YWS so welcome! I'm excited to review your first poem on the website, for said poem is pretty ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! May I say that I really like this poem, it was written really well and you used wonderful words to add to the rush ...

Hey SilverBerry here for a review! I'd like to start by saying that the story was really cute and whimsical and kind of quirky, and I enjoyed reading it for ...

Hi! Silverberry here for a review! Your poem is written really well and your rhymes didn't feel forced to me, so good job! You have a lot of contradicting lines, ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! Overall your story was very well done and absorbing and you have a good eye for detail and your pace was very good. You ...

Hey Herby! Silverberry here for a review! As you well know, I rarely dabble with poems that do not rhyme, but this one caught my eye and I actually really ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a review! I actually really enjoyed your poem, it flowed well, had a lot of emotion that I could feel as I was reading it, and ...

Hey! Silverberry here to review! And first of all may I say that your poem is really touching and hopeful, even though you talked about the evil in people, and ...

Hey, Silverberry here for a review! It's probably going to be a short one though for I didn't see many edits that you could make! Good job! I liked the ...