SilloriaD

Hello! Just a quick disclaimer, I haven't done a review on here in a while, and especially not for poetry, but I'm going to try my best to do you ...

It's kinda weird- your style, admittedly- and I don't quite understand what this is about. I'm very, very confused. I'm not sure what to think here. Also, just curious, why ...

Hello! That ending could've been funny, but I felt that it was a little lack luster, and I think that's thanks to the description and the opening. We all knew ...

I have goosebumps. If you want the emotional review, let me collect myself... Okay, I think I'm alright. I want to begin by saying I'm sorry for your loss last ...

I think I understand what you're trying to stay, though I agree that it's a little confusing at the end... if you aren't looking for certain things. Luckily, I managed ...

I had to take a moment to compose myself after reading this. I'll get to how much the actual point means to me in a moment. First I just want ...

Hello! This is an... interesting idea. I'm not into it, myself, but I am very picky about what mythological things I will and won't read. I will say that, in ...

Hello! Okay, so to begin, I want to cover the bad things to get them out of the way. "I hurl in a small ball With a tear that drops ...

Hello again! " as far as he remembered everyone had a different illusion." Capitalization. I know, nitpicky. But I have more than just basic English corrections today, bear with me. ...

Hi there! I loveeee that second verse and that ending line. It all just fits somehow. I disagree with CreativelyWritten. It all flows well to me. The rhyme scheme is ...

Hello there! So, once again, as I feel I must say with almost all poems I see here, you need to capitalize the first letter of the line. I almost ...

Hello! I have very few things I think need to be fixed. The few that I do have are nit picky, so don't take them too seriously. So, that last ...

Hello! So, first things first, you kept changing between past tense and present tense. Let me give you an example of where I saw it... "I’ve been walking to the ...

So I'm just going to get straight to the point, since I'm rather bad about going off on tangents. There's too much repetition. Way, wayyyyyy too much repetition. The flow ...

Oh wow.... I think I fell in love with this! So, to begin, your details here are astoundingly beautiful. However, there are a few bald spots. "That’s why they say ...