SilentRain

Wow, for the firt poem you wrote this is really good :) I wish I could give you advice but it seems as if you need none, good job! Keep ...

Wow! I really like this! Fits my mood really well. I really like how you personified the excuses. I cant really do much of a review because this is really ...

Sad... Oh, and, I'm not sure if this is considered poetry... ~Rain~

Everyone...

Welcome to YWS my LoveBug! Good poem. Just call me if you need any help with anything! Your loving and inspiring big sister, ~Rain~

Looking over this now, the simicolons bug me... I'm gonna change those now. Well, thats for all the help!! ~Rain~

Thanks for all the great reviews!!

This is an antithesis, it compares two differant ideas, to mean one over all thing in the end... I used "This Love" as a way to say something like "This ...

Thank you both, I see what you mean though, about the sentances... ~Rain~

Show who ever you like, thats ok:) ~Rain~

Well thank you, I wrote this awhile ago; I'm trying to revise old work that can be saved, lolz ~Rain~

Thanks for the comments! This was about me, but it was written awhile ago... I'm going better now... ~Rain~

Thanks to you both for the nice comment!! I wrote this when me and my sister were going through a really hard time with my dad and my family so, ...

Well, thatnks for telling me that, I think it did clear thing up a bit... ~Rain~

Wow, this is great, just great! I love the last lines, mainly the last. you may consider adding to it, now it is short and sweet, but if you added ...