SilentRain

Hello Hello, sorry it took me so long to get to this, I have not been able to get on the computer. So, I looked at this a little while ...

Well, I think first of with this you need to put it into proper lines and stanzas... At first you had it in lines, but then just wrote it like ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really like this poem, it was really good, I like the beginning the best though. Faded eyes And stormy skies, Lowly shadows, And twisted lies. ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I really liked the beginning, the middle and end didn't flow as good, but were still good. I think you should change all the "I am"s ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I will review the first one first. Red - Grammer mistakes Blue - Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my ...

Hello!! So, I think this is a really good emotional poem. The ryme is good, it may be better is you had a set rhyme scheme though. Like have the ...

Hello!! Rain here! Well, I'd like to see the original version... So, I like this, I like the first and seconf stanzas, the thrid doesn't seem to fit though... I ...

Hello, Rain here!! So, this is really basic, it can be good, if you work on it, but as is, it is just to basic. You really don't give us ...

Hello!!! This is good, I think you should add more onto it though. I lie in wait,

I really like this poem, it is really good. Red - Grammer mistakes Blue - Things I think you should change to make the poem better, in my opinion, or ...

Hello!! Rain here, Sorry it took such a long time to get to this. Well, the only problem that I really have is the structure. you have each sentance as ...

Hello!! Rain here!! So, I rally have nothing to comment on about the poem itself, mainly because I think it is really good, but the structure, i think, need some ...

Hello, Rain here. It's a claustrophobic N ight with a suffocated A ir.

Hello, sorr it took me so long to get here. Thanksgiving week and all made it hard for me to get to anything on the computer... So, I like this, ...

Hello!! Rain here!! Well, I really liked this! It was really good, the rhyme was great, not really forced at all. The poem flowed really good at the beginning, got ...