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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 1

    I had to come read chapter 1 after I read chapter 2 lol. If you have any questions about this please let me know, I enjoyed it! An assassin was ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: God's Assassin ★ 2

    First off, I love stories with gods in them, my favorite, especially lately. I even have been working on my own novel, heavily based with active deities in it. That ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Within my blood (Prologue)

    Hey just stopping by for a quick review! Some of these are of course my opinion so feel free to do with them what you wish! It is always a ...

    Jul 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Hey just stopping by for a quick review! As I haven’t read the previous chapters I may be missing different nuances you are trying to portray, so take everything I ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The beginning

    Just stopping by for a quick review, thanks for posting this and allowing myself and others to read it. As always parts of this are my own opinion and you ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: The Separation (NaLu)

    I love Fairy Tail so thanks for sharing this, it was fun to read! Some of the following is my opinion of course, so do with it what you will! ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 1 of 'Jadeland'

    Hey just stopping by for a quick review! As always parts of these comments are my opinions, so feel free to ask for any clarification! I'm sure you all know ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Epilogue: Wasting Hours.

    Just dropping by for a review. You have have any questions feel free to let me know! I did enjoy this, and some of my comments are opinions and nit ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Prologue (Blasphemy)

    Hello! Just stopping by for a review! If you have any questions just let me know, some things are just my opinion of course, so feel free to take or ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Destruction// Prologue

    Hello! Jut going to do a quick review. Feel free to ask any questions you may have, I will do my best to be helpful in this. Also I want ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Fauve Ch 1

    Hey Nymeria! First off I love your user name! That being said i am going to give this a go with a review. Please feel free to ask any questions, ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Immortal Tear

    First off I love sci-if! Second off good for you for trying something new and experimenting with flash fiction. I'll throw in my two cents, and do what you will ...

    Jun 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Ice Queen Chapter 6

    Yay! Good job! I enjoyed your story. Below are my critiques, thoughts, and opinions. Of course your story is your own, so feel free to agree or not agree with ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 10

    Hello! And thank you for this very enjoyable read! He kept the gang in funds with his lottery winnings, spread between convenience stores and banks and bought, paid for, and ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: Love Through the Bars (Joan and James New Title) Part Three of the First Chapter

    Hey Sheadun, enjoyed reading your work here! Couple things I would like to point out! “Ah yes, Thomas, I am well. My condolences for the loss of young Henry. He ...

    Jun 28, 2017


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
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