Shine

Nice short story indeed.I like reading articles like reality captured in words.Would like to read more of such work if you come across something interesting . Words are strong and ...

Thumbs up for this,firstly such a sweet and nice story which is blended into this poem,secondly it has got a nice rythym,the words tune along very well.Thirdly I felt as ...

In all a nice effort Eraqio. Someday I might look up without fear of falling, down isnt a direction, just a way of life. I’ve been so long without a ...

Dear you need to re do this I think,because there are numerous grammatical mistakes. From that first day, My goal was set When our eye s met I was like ...

Thats a nice piece.8.5/10! Do go for the spell check once before you post your work,it just takes some seconds. Its such a lovely work and those small unintentional typed ...

Since its the 1st draft you can work on it more.You just can't start a poem randomly, perhaps you can but by the time the reader finishes reading the poem ...

This was the best chapter so far. Extremely good.You were good at making the reader feel your area's like That was the year everything went wrong. That was the year ...

Nice going. I liked this chapters ending,I think so far uptil 5th thsi was the best somehow.heh. As we were celebrating Aanam’s first boyfriend, I noticed something I should have ...

Thats a sweet poem.You need to put some puntuations thats the only thing which it lacks. You could have extended the poem more I felt. But never mind it was ...

This story is going great. The small errors are already pointed out so me left with the job to praise it only.lol I really like the plot. And the title ...

That was Enjoyable.But I have to point out that puntuations where are they? I liked thsi part; Are you ready? The devil is in the house You will burn in ...

First of all you need to add more puntuations to your work dear.Even if its a lyrical one you need to add the stops and the commas. I would say ...

Real stories are always worth reading.Good job.I felt like you could have added more details like you never said what Natasha wore or something like that.Anyhow its good this way ...

That was a good attempt. Frankly from the second line I started liking it,I didn't really get the first line,it seemed like confusing the reader at first chance,but thats just ...

Broken thread of a kite....awesoem ending dear, loved it. I exactly know how it feels because even my bro away for studies. Anyhow this was though a sad poem it ...