Dear you need to re do this I think,because there are numerous grammatical mistakes.
From that first day,
My goal was set
When our eyes met
I was like your little pet
Age is just a number
But these number’s are to high
I was broken,
Yet, I wont be just another gambling token
I didn't really find any meaning in this stanza.
Your like a drug
And I'm an addicted
Its going to be hard to stop
Because I was taught to keep fighting
Either you write "I'm addicted" or "I'm an addict"
I break, and break
Yet I’m not ready to stop
I don’t want to give it up
But I love you...
I will fight for my life.
I will fight for the one i love.
I just want to be by your side.
Forever and ever.
Your the reason I wake up.
The reason I smile.
The reason I pile on the make up,
Just for the one I love.
Good luck girl,you got the potential,just try and you will succeed.
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