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Re: Front Lines - The Story of A Doomed Man
Hi VinatgeCola.. This short story was amazing.. I was literally at the edge of my seat with every sentence.. The last sort of countdown that you started just added to ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: do you remember like I do?
Hi Marmalade.. Sweet user name by the way.. Anyways so this is what I felt after reading the poem.. First of all, it is a very nice piece in itself.. ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Life as a Painting
Hi DarkPrizm.. This poem is so in tune with your username.. Like a prism breaks the white light into seven colours.. Just like that you have symbolised emotions using colours ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Two little monsters
Hey Tom.. really nice plot you got there.. There is intensity.. And you have done the revelation or brought about the twist in a very smooth manner.. although it is ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: Footsteps
Hi Kaneki.. I see that you love writing pieces in this unique manner which is actually cool.. But I think if you would have specified the genre, it would appeal ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: The Monster
Hi Ishita.. just so you know, I am also an Indian.. And I can totally relate to the point you have picked up.. I love the statement- "If you call ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: The Lie.
Oh! cedesxana.. you just read my mind.. I mean, I have been going through a similar sort of phase and can totally relate to M... I love the twist in ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: a quiet death
Hey.. this is Sharon.. okay.. so, this piece is extremely well written.. and i guess it falls in the Modern genre of poetry.. but I, being a lover of literature, ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: his and hers
Hi Anngelalu.. I really loved the poem.. It just truly speaks out the character of two people that the readers have no idea of.. and the words as well as ...
Oct 20, 2016 -
Re: Upon The Bridge
This is a really good poem, Braiden. It totally justifies it's genre of dramatic mystery or suspense. But I personally feel that your sentences could have been a bit long ...
Oct 20, 2016
