Sharon1407

Hey there, Sharon here for a quick review. This poem is a brief and precise description of the bird, indeed. Some things you can change about it though are to ...

Hey Sharon here for a review. Okay, first and foremost, a very crucial point for any literary work is grammar. Yes, poetry never follows strict rules on grammar but you ...

Hey Sharon here for a review. Okay so first thing that comes to mind after reading this work is that the title doesn't quite fit. I am personally very fond ...

Hey Radrook, Sharon here for a short review. First thing that I noticed about this work is that it lacks a bit of structure. The structure of the sentences as ...

Hi. Sharon here for a short review. The poem is actually very beautiful. The imagery in so few words is excellent. But at the same time I feel like this ...

Hey, Sharon here for a quick review. First of all, let me say that this is a really good read. I mean on a one time read, it gives the ...

Hey! Sharon here for a quick review. I see you've got quite a few reviews on this work. I understand that this is a flash fiction work but I feel ...

Hey CrazyGirl. I don't know if you will consider this a review or not but I just want to say how I feel about this work. I have never seen ...

Hey there Sharon here for a review. First of all, this poem is extremely deep. It has a sense of darkness underlying the words and hopelessness as well. On one ...

Hey screamingsloth! I must say well done! The poem really brings out the essence of thrill,suspense and fear while maintaining its rhythm and flow. At points it may seem slightly ...

Heya... Sharon1407 here for a review... First of all, I would like to say that I generally review poems but this time I think some force drove me to review ...

Hey... Sharon1407 here for a review... I see that you wanted to project the subject here as a person who is depressed. But what the poem really needs is first, ...

Hey there, Sharon1407 here for a review. Well, I get what you are trying to say here. But truly, I feel that this poem could have been executed way better ...

Hey there... Sharon1407 here for a review... This work has great quality within. It has obvious depth but I love how you have made that visible in the best way ...

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Hey there... Firstly, it was too good a read. Although it deals with the more negative feelings of life, It is relatable which I think, should the foremost concern in ...