Shalie

Wow. This story is deep and dark, but it is good. With each entry I wanted to read more to find out what would happen next. I love how this ...

Hey, I love this story already! I can't wait to read more. First of all, ‘Thud’ another voice was heard, “Cling Cling” the voices continued, and I heard voices of ...

This is a very good chapter as well. At first I wanted to tell Val to grow up, then I remembered that the girls are teenagers. Sadly that is a ...

Wow. This was deep, but it was also funny. This poem was very good. It has a lot of meaning to it. It gives me something to think about, and ...

Hey, I enjoyed this poem. This poem painted a picture in the mind. I can picture someone living out in the country and to get to their neighbors house, it ...

Very good short poem. It is straight to the point. I believe the same thing a house is just a building. A home is where the heart is. You can ...

I like this poem. It is short and to the point. In a way the second stanza reminds me Flutershy from My Little Pony. There is a part where she ...

This poem puts me in a dark place. I am not sure what you are tell the readers in this poem, however I picture someone who fell in love. And, ...

I loved this poem. I picture someone being bullied. Where the bully is putting the victim down to make themselves feel better. I can identify with he victim. I was ...

This story has me hooked right away. I can't wait to read more, however, this slightly bothers me. What parents let their children walk alone (even if they have each ...

As the meme saying goes, "Well that escalated quickly." And it did. I loved your story though it was a bit creepy and random. But, the randomness was good thing ...

I actually found this story funny. Probably because I didn't have a cell phone till I was late High School, we had dial-up, I grew up playing outside til dusk. ...

I loved your poem. I love how the girl starts of with innocents in her life, then she is still innocent, but easily influenced by others around her, then she ...

I am literally shaking from reading your story. This was a great story that sent a chill up my spine. "I am Sam, Sam I am." I can imagine just ...

I loved reading this poem. You did a great job with rhyming in your poem. That is something I have difficult doing. You also did a great job making the ...