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Re: Paintball Poetry
This poem is very good. I love the concept. I myself am more of a get down and dirty girl (no pun or sexual meaning to that you perverts, haha). ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: The Hunger Games short fanfic
This was beautifully written. You really had me going for a while there. I held my breath the whole time. Then to read that it is just a dream. You ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Twelve Days Of Depression
Hey! This was oddly enough, awesome! I enjoyed reading your own version of the 12 days of Christmas. I also found this strangely humorcal, despite there is nothing funny about ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Cutter
Hello! This is going to sound creepy, however I enjoyed your poem. I was drawn into your poem. I actually can relate to your poem. I used to be a ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Language as you like
Wow. This is interesting. I am not sure what I liked most about this poem but it drew me in. I wanted to keep reading it. That is a good ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: A Partridge and a Pear (Part 1 of The Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
This is a very interesting story. I am just curious is Ben the one who told the dark elves that he was her guardian angel? Also where is the vine ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Ghost Hospital
I love scary stories. You did a good job pulling the reader in. I would like to know more about the history of this hospital. How it got started? Where ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: The Church is Bloodstained
Whoa, this is deep! I am not sure what the meaning is behind this poem. However, this poem reached out to me. This is because I used to cut myself, ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: How To Sneak Into Your Room Late at Night
This story was funny. And brought a smile to my face. This however, would been useless when I was a teen. My dad was always one step ahead. He would ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: Would you like to know how you died?
I loved this story. This story was heart touching and warming, however this is sad also. But it is sad in a good way. To see that he gives up ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: The Stalker
Hi! I am here to review for the Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! This is a good story. I can't wait to read more. The first thing is 'Her ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Darkness Surrenders My Soul
Hi! I am here to review for the Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! First of all, the first word in every sentence is capitalized along with names and when ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbelievable night
Hi! I am here to review for the Epic Ice Cream Warriors of Pluto! For such a simple story this sent chills up my spine. Anyways, for someone who's English ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: I Am Not Limitless
Hey there! For so few words this poem has a lot of meaning to it. Question though, did you mean bones or bonds? I just wanted to make sure I ...
Nov 10, 2013 -
Re: Last Ones Standing
I love this story. I never read a short story where it had poems in the story. It surprised me, however it flowed so well I had to keep reading! ...
Nov 7, 2013