Shady

Hey Dude! This review is slow coming (and I'm sorry for that)...but here at last. "We cried too, not only for her, but also because we knew Vaha-ni was gone.”"~ ...

...Resuming review... I like how this chapter smoothly transitions from the last part's ending (which, I forgot to mention there, was good; it enticed me to read on.) "Juliana sat ...

Hey Dude! Skipping the pleasantries and getting to business... "“I’m sorry, but I’ve said enough for now.”"~ I think that this is a bit stiff. I like how Dyne openly ...

Hey Kit! As a person I know that you're trying to be a witness for God, but as a Christian I feel that I must correct comment. *Referring to content* ...

Hey Angel! I see you're new here, so welcome! I hope you'll enjoy your stay with us here! If you have any questions about, well, anything; or if you want ...

Hey n1o! This seems like poetry (which I am not experienced with), so you'd probably get more reviews if you tagged it as such, since there are many poets on ...

Hey Noelle! I tend to start my reviews with complaints, and then move to compliments, so please bear with me. "A single chandelier hung from the ceiling. The floor was ...

Hey Iluv! This poem is beautiful! I like the theme, and your analogies (i.e. 'But it melted away, Like chocolate on a hot day.'). It's paced very nicely too. :D ...

Hey Karzin! Hey Penguin! Hey Cadi! Okay, I'm no poet (so this review won't be of much technical help), but I saw that this wasn't getting any comments; and it ...

Hey Erza! I'm poetically challenged -_- so I wouldn't really know if your poem flows as it should; but I liked it. It seems like it is paced nicely; and ...

Hey Ghostie! Wow! This is absolutely amazing!! My reviews usually tend to lean towards the harsh-side, but I can't find a single thing to complain about in your story. You're ...

Hey tam! Okay, I'm not exactly sure of the purpose of these facts... but they seem fairly reasonable (except for getting emotionally attached to others. I don't agree with your ...

Hey Vanz, So, before I begin my review, I want you to know that I love your avvie. It's hilarious! :D But, getting down to business now; I feel I ...

Hey Lisa! Okay, so my reviews tend to be a line-by-line critique, so bear with me if my review gets a bit long. "...secure that I am actually awake..."~ I ...

Hey Dude! So out of this whole story, I only found one matter that I can nit pick, and it is: "The fear he felt towards the creature dissipated entirely."~ ...