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You

by ERZA


Oh you know you always knew.
Say to me that you know me.
You always come to me in my deams
Say you know you know me.

I was running after a butterfly
When I saw you.
Oh you know, you know me too well.
But, you are somehow so unreal.

In my dreams you appear,
In the same field of flowers,
And under the same blue sky.
You know you liked my garden.

Oh you are one of a kind.
You smell like the flowers
That bloomed in my heart
When I first saw you in my dreams.

Oh you know- I know
That you are real
Say...when you will come to me?
I saw you in the park that day.

You were looking at me from far
When I looked at you,
You started to fade away.
Oh you know, you are so unreal.


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Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:50 am
Kopaka says...



Well I liked it. :D

Seems to be sad and happy at the same time.




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Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:47 am
Shady wrote a review...



Hey Erza!

I'm poetically challenged -_- so I wouldn't really know if your poem flows as it should; but I liked it. It seems like it is paced nicely; and was easy to read. I liked your...topic? (I'm sorry, I don't know poetry terms)

It was interesting, and you wrote it very prettily. I liked your poem alot! :D

~Shady





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