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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Untitled for now

    Hey Trin! Sorry this has taken me a bit, life's been crazy. :^{ Anyway, getting to your review: and securing her daggers hidden in her boots. Selene had been a ...

    Dec 17, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: My Hero

    Hey Reve! I haven't been reviewing much lately (school, ack!), and now I see that this work has been sitting here for a month without getting any reviews. Not sure ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dear Lorraine

    Hey Devan! Here with your review, as requested. I tend to give line-by-line critiques, sporatically broken by a more general over-view. Just bear with me if it gets tedious. cause ...

    Dec 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Red Rimmed: Prologue- rewritten

    Hey Clarity! Sorry for the wait, but I'm finally here, as requested! :D You're already familiar with my reviews, so I'll jump straight to business: I like your opening. Usually ...

    Nov 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: To Watch and Burn

    Hey JayShay! Welcome to the site! I hope you'll find YWS helpful and enjoyable. :) I came here to see if I could help you, but, from my end at ...

    Nov 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Wild

    Hey Onar! This is a neat piece of work you have here. I'm not good a poetry, so if other reviewers disagree with me, I'd advise you to listen to ...

    Nov 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A game of hide and seek...

    Hey Clarity! I'm here to return the favor. ;) I must say that I quite like this poem alot. Most break up poems/songs tend to get tedious, in my opinion, ...

    Nov 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: .

    ...erm... I was going to review this for you, since you gave me such a nice review on my piece...but...it's you have it some other place? If you post your ...

    Nov 12, 2012
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re:

    Hey Harbo! I see you're fairly new here, so welcome! If you have any questions, feel free to PM or wall me, and I'll do my best to point you ...

    Nov 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Desolate: Chapter Three

    Hey Adox! I'm going to try not to comment on character/plot development too much, since I haven't gotten the pleasure of reading your prologue or first two chapters...well, I'll comment ...

    Nov 8, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Perks of the Job - Chapter 1

    Hey Heus! Thanks for requesting a review! :D I see that you're new here, so welcome. Feel free to PM me if you need any help navigating the site, or ...

    Oct 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: In The Land Of Druevern Chapter 1 (A Hero Of Time)

    Hey Necro! You requested a review, so here I am. :D Sorry this was a while in the coming- that evil that is school has succeeded in trapping me in ...

    Oct 25, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Project Clair - Chapter 1

    Hey Nero! I'll gladly review your first chapter. The prologue was a pleasure. :) Jumping straight to the review: dense sea of trees in the distance casting _ shadow over ...

    Oct 20, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Sylvester

    Hey Confetti! I don't typically read stories written from a different creature's perspective, but, hey, I'm willing to give it a shot- just be warned that this is only the ...

    Oct 1, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: When Words Can't Describe

    Hey Mori! Shady here with your review! :D Jumping straight in... Not sharp upon the hour, but five minutes past. ~ I really like the description you've put into your ...

    Sep 30, 2012


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