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Re: Untitled for now
Hey Trin! Sorry this has taken me a bit, life's been crazy. :^{ Anyway, getting to your review: and securing her daggers hidden in her boots. Selene had been a ...
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: My Hero
Hey Reve! I haven't been reviewing much lately (school, ack!), and now I see that this work has been sitting here for a month without getting any reviews. Not sure ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Dear Lorraine
Hey Devan! Here with your review, as requested. I tend to give line-by-line critiques, sporatically broken by a more general over-view. Just bear with me if it gets tedious. cause ...
Dec 5, 2012 -
Re: Red Rimmed: Prologue- rewritten
Hey Clarity! Sorry for the wait, but I'm finally here, as requested! :D You're already familiar with my reviews, so I'll jump straight to business: I like your opening. Usually ...
Nov 30, 2012 -
Re: To Watch and Burn
Hey JayShay! Welcome to the site! I hope you'll find YWS helpful and enjoyable. :) I came here to see if I could help you, but, from my end at ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: The Wild
Hey Onar! This is a neat piece of work you have here. I'm not good a poetry, so if other reviewers disagree with me, I'd advise you to listen to ...
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re: A game of hide and seek...
Hey Clarity! I'm here to return the favor. ;) I must say that I quite like this poem alot. Most break up poems/songs tend to get tedious, in my opinion, ...
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re: .
...erm... I was going to review this for you, since you gave me such a nice review on my piece...but...it's you have it some other place? If you post your ...
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re:
Hey Harbo! I see you're fairly new here, so welcome! If you have any questions, feel free to PM or wall me, and I'll do my best to point you ...
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re: Desolate: Chapter Three
Hey Adox! I'm going to try not to comment on character/plot development too much, since I haven't gotten the pleasure of reading your prologue or first two chapters...well, I'll comment ...
Nov 8, 2012 -
Re: Perks of the Job - Chapter 1
Hey Heus! Thanks for requesting a review! :D I see that you're new here, so welcome. Feel free to PM me if you need any help navigating the site, or ...
Oct 29, 2012 -
Re: In The Land Of Druevern Chapter 1 (A Hero Of Time)
Hey Necro! You requested a review, so here I am. :D Sorry this was a while in the coming- that evil that is school has succeeded in trapping me in ...
Oct 25, 2012 -
Re: Project Clair - Chapter 1
Hey Nero! I'll gladly review your first chapter. The prologue was a pleasure. :) Jumping straight to the review: dense sea of trees in the distance casting _ shadow over ...
Oct 20, 2012 -
Re: Sylvester
Hey Confetti! I don't typically read stories written from a different creature's perspective, but, hey, I'm willing to give it a shot- just be warned that this is only the ...
Oct 1, 2012 -
Re: When Words Can't Describe
Hey Mori! Shady here with your review! :D Jumping straight in... Not sharp upon the hour, but five minutes past. ~ I really like the description you've put into your ...
Sep 30, 2012
