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Re: The Auction
Hey Fortis! Shady here with a review for your poem this time. ;) As I mentioned earlier, I tend to be really rotten at reviewing poems, but this piece was ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: A Lord's Bane Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey Egs! Thanks for giving me the link to this lovely piece. The people of the Chatroom Games chose poetry, this week. Sorry. :/ However! You will still receive a ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: memoni
Hey Hannah! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. I apologize if it's not very helpful. I tend not to review poetry, but as the people vote, ...
Jul 30, 2013 -
Re: The Truth of Dodd Franks Wall Street Reform and Consumer Protection Act
Hey Hero! I must say, I'm not as informed on the matter of Wall Street as I should be, so I'm not sure that I can be much help on ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter IV
Hey Ri! I know I'm already getting a pre-published screening of your novel, but I figured I might as well stop by and give you a proper review on this. ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The story's all over you
Hey Klara! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. c: You start off this piece strong. I tend to decide I'm going to review a piece, skim ...
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: Crystal Blue Eyes - Prologue
Hey Katie! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. c: I like how you start this piece. The gravestone with that bit of guilt in the "What'd ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: First Night Out: Part 1
Hey Gib! I see you're fairly new here, so welcome. I'm Shady, and I'll be reviewing for you this fine afternoon. c: Carly Wilde is a socially awkward girl who ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Prologue (Revised) - The Golden Eagle Supremacy Trilogy
Hey Quil! Finally! I see your work while I'm not distracted, and have time for a review! :D This piece has a nice, strong beginning. Talking about time, and how ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Souls and their existence....
Hey Erza! Shady here with a second review for you this fine morning. c: Again, you have really...interesting...ideas. Let's correct the phonetics first, before we go into theology, yes? However, ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Smiles
Hey Erza! Shady here with a review for you this fine morning. c: I like the overall topic of this essay. Smiling. It's interesting, and I didn't know about the ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate
This is brilliant. Truly brilliant, Veersies. This is my favorite bit, I think. Give me two minutes and I'm sure this'll be worth your time. Unless you don't have two ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: Silence and Solitude
Hey Luka! Shady here with a review for you this fine afternoon. c: You have a good, strong start to your story. The first paragraph is enticing. A person going ...
Jul 10, 2013 -
Re: Iasc
Hey Ean! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. c: I don't get to review many scripts (actually, this is the first, tbh), so please forgive any ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Revenant - Prologue
Hey Xan! Shady here with a review for you this fine evening. Once long ago, a curse was put on my family by a great necromancer. Over six thousand years ...
Jul 7, 2013
