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Shadow here :D Quite a bit of things going on in this short chapter. I felt a little lost, but that may be because I'm tired lol. I do love ...

Shadow here :D I must say that this is a very interesting piece of work. Its just one of those really good works that keep you reading even though it ...

Shadow here, and first of all, Welcome to YWS! Glad you decided to join us today :D Now, for a chapter, this feels a little short. I would suggest adding ...

Shadowolf here :D Another story I have nothing to give back to! The world must be ending or something...or I'm just way too tired to be trying to make reviews. ...

Shadowolf here :D I must say. I have absolutely nothing to critique! This story was well written from beginning to end. It held just enough interest to keep me reading, ...

Shadowolf here :D This is a very interesting story you have here, so lets get right into it. "My adrenaline fuelled heart beats effortlessly against my pounding chest" I would ...

Shadowolf here :D I do apologize if i miss something XD I'm semi new...ish to this. Welp, to work then! "fingers rubbing the sleep from my eyes" By removing "my ...

Shadowolf here :D Nice little short story you have here, but im gonna get right into it. Your usage of vocabulary is quite impressive and vast, the only issue I ...

Shadowolf here :D So, interesting story you have here, is it going to continue? In the first portion of the story, there are a lot of what feels like unfinished ...

Shadowolf Here :D Great read! Keep up the great work, i'm gonna jump right into the critique So the first thing I noticed, was that you should probably change shadow ...

Shadowolf here :D "Standing tall, and looking left and right slowly" Remove the 'and' "formed from the fog" Either encase in dashes or remove. "lights that were in need of ...

Shadowolf here :D Very nice read, i have to say its an interesting twist on this category, while reading I only found this for you. "It was much too far ...

Shadowolf here :D Interesting story "or the torcher machine as I call it" Torcher should be torture. As well as this being in between some parenthesizes or dashes. "he can ...

Shadowolf here :D "do is watch Netflix and" Add three dots after 'and' or a dash, shows that her thought has trailed off or been interrupted. "where this dude at ...

Shadowolf here :D So this is quiet a short prologue, but seeing as how that's what it is, its not too big a problem. The main thing I'm going to ...