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Thank you for your review! I'm really glad you liked the first chapter. Ryder (and Ryan's) relationship with their mother is slowly fleshed out over time. They will never like ...

Wow...I really liked that. It captured my attention from the first line which is always good. I liked the way it flowed, also. It flowed perfectly. :-) Good job! Shadow ...

Thanks. :-) It was hard to write because I couldn't for the life of me remember everything that happened that night.

Thanks! I'm working on chapter 3 right now. I'm really enjoying writing it.

Thanks. I opened with Raven because she was the first character that really opened up to me. (Besides the triplets.) Adianna, the Queen, hasn't shown her emotions too largely because ...

Thanks! I'm in the process of revising the whole book right now. :-)

Hey, Well, the first thing I have to say is that I really like this. You can tell that you put real effort into writing it. Being a survivor of ...

I loved this! It was...can't think of the right word at the moment but it was really good. I couldn't find any flaws that were big enough to say anything ...

I've just gotta say that this is AMAZING! I loved how you could write about something without ever really outright saying the topic, and yet I still understood what you ...

This was amazing! It was very emotional, which is a good thing. I could actually feel your characters' emotions as I read. All in all, I loved reading this. -Shadow

Usually I don't review poems but after I read this one I found that I had to. This is a really good one. I could feel the emotions that you ...

This is great! The only thing that I can find wrong with it is that you don't give your narrator a name. If you gave him a name, this story ...

First off, I really do think that you should post a part 2. It ended in a way that made me go, "aw man, what happens next?" And that is ...

Wow. I liked this one a lot. I like how you wrote about something that I would honestly never write about. All in all, it was a fun read.

Thanks. I like putting myself in my characters shoes. It makes writing the piece really interesting. That's what I do with mostly all of my writing and it must work ...