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  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Deaths Grief

    Hey Katnes! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Apr 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love

    Hey jayoof! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! Oh, and by the way, welcome to the site! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so ...

    Feb 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Crazy

    Hi BookPrincess313! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! Oh, and by the way, welcome to the site! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so ...

    Dec 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: For A Girl

    Hi Whosabell and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was ...

    Dec 11, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memes

    Hi E.E! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Dec 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: i used to be human

    Hi Kara! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Why do I do this

    Hi Whosabell, E.E, and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Little Water Monsters

    Hi E.E and Pal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: On The Other Side of The Page

    Hi BookishBrook! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bother and Bothered

    Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 28, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: For Em- The snake story

    Hi WhosabellCanWrite! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 14, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ~Suckers 2~

    Hi WhosabellCanWrite! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: Death by pizza

    Hi LordTachanka! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! And welcome to YWS, by the way! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Lacking In Warmth

    Hi woahhitherepal! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Oct 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Pocket Full Of Posies

    Hi Flumadiddle! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

    Oct 24, 2017


If we choose, we can live in a world of comforting illusion.
— Noam Chomsky